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Still Bleeding, Anacreontic Couplet

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Written for Silent Ones contest, anacreontic couplets..

dear soupers, thank you for everything, happy new year, i have been busy with real life.. i will be slowly catching up etc. just wanted to post this before contest closes.. quick scribble

Still bleeding from curse of hate. Demon eyes gaze at my fate. Where is my silent sweet knight, who will save me from this plight? Slay this evil with his wrath, then lay petals on my path.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2024 7:19:00 PM

Congratulations IE!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2024 9:58:00 AM

I enjoyed this one very much. I like the simplicity of the work. You tell so much in its ease of reading and understanding. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2024 9:49:00 AM

Short and bittersweet I want to see the winner list. Pretty sure this one made it high!

Valsa George

Date: 1/2/2024 4:52:00 AM

Though you might not have taken much time to write this, this has come out so well ! Poetry, you have always up your sleeve dear Empress. The sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought! Shelley has been so right. Your pain is palpable in every line. Forget the past and embrace a New Year of hope dear ! Let your wounds heal.... I sincerely pray. Into my FAVE.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 10:02:00 PM

Wonderful entry for the contest, Ink. Very soulful poetry. It says so much in such a short form. Love and Light my sweet friend. A FAV for my list! Bill

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2024 6:28:00 PM

Dear Ink Empress, your anguished imagery and spot-on rhymes are intriguing and captivating. The exquisite pain is palpable and so poetically expressed, my soulful friend. There is beauty in sadness and angst and your gifted pen captures this elusive quality with finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year filled with light, peace and poetic inspiration.. ~Susan

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 4:09:00 PM

I feel pain, grief, and sadness as I read this poem. I hope you find your silent sweet knight...perhaps he's supposed to find you perhaps when you're not looking :-) I wish evil would be gone from your path. Have a pleasant week ahead, hugs, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 1/1/2024 3:06:00 PM

Lovely poem, I'm wishing you the best. Blessings on whatever you have to do, and lots of light!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 10:31:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much sweet soul i appreciate you so much

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/1/2024 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations Ink Empress, Yours is a towering poem that deserves every accolade imaginable. Intense imagery that sustains an emotional narrative at each point. Thought provoking. Happy New Year Howard

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 10:26:00 PM

Thank you so much truly that means alot, i appreciate your wishes too, happy new year to you too

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/1/2024 2:20:00 PM

Highly expressive poem, Ink. I hear the cry of grief --succinctly delivered.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 10:25:00 PM

Ah dear Vijay thank you so very much for your kind support always! I am always grateful for your generous visits and wishes

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/1/2024 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. You said so much in just 6 lines. Where is the silent sweet knight??? Have a blessed day writing away in 24................

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 10:18:00 PM

Thank you so much sweet paula i appreciate your kind and generous support truly

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2024 10:54:00 AM

I hope you can tend to those wounds and a knight arrives to save you from those demons and stop your from bleeding.. I think you asking a bit too much for petals on your path.. so spoilt lol.. nicely done dear.. seems like you got it in just in time.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 11:03:00 AM

That was quick lol! Well i prefer getting spoilt haha thank you so much for placing my lil anacreontic. So generous of you silent one

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/1/2024 10:44:00 AM

Ooo come thruuuuu rhymes!!!! Y u busy with real life aeee … I waiting for u to start new year resolution with me aee!!! … where ur silent sweet knight aeee … I come also help u look ae!! Lay petals on ur path?? Ok u wait let me spray spf on the path first aeee .. sometimes some petals r rotten ae… cannot start 2024 with rotten stuff ae!! I love this piece papi… lemme guess I am the knight XD!!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 11:04:00 AM

Hahaha you are funny papi

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 1/1/2024 9:50:00 AM

Love the rhymes so much ….

Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 11:04:00 AM

I knew you would thank you so much