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Still Alive

STILL ALIVE
Screaming, my contorted face
Buried in this hard ground
By a naughty Nate, wickedly unsound
Natural beauty in my cold palace
I'M COMING BACK FOR MY REVENGE

*This Poem is a Nate Special for PoetrySoup
  as a response to his poem "Alive"

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Just That Archaic Poet

October 23, 2013 at 1:28 PM

Very cool piece; enjoyed it very much, V. Kudos! :)

Charmaine Chircop

January 2, 2013 at 11:54 PM

Hello Hanitra..Its so easy to get inspired by other poets.Enjoyed reading your revenge response:).Hope you give us more to read.Have a blessed and Happy New Year.

Charmaine Chircop

January 2, 2013 at 11:55 PM

and thanks for stopping to read my post...

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2012 at 9:17 PM

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday , Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Richard Lamoureux

November 11, 2012 at 8:42 AM

It is always comforting to read the title of your first poem on this page Hanitra. I do however look forward to reading more from you. I know you have lots within you waiting to escape onto a page. I hope this note finds you well. Your Canadian Friend Rick

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

November 11, 2012 at 12:30 PM

Hi, Rick! Nice to have someone to remind me of the Holy Duties of The Poet...But sometimes, it seems, everyday life must have its own way and tries to attract you far, far away from all the important things that make your life worth living! Anyway, here I am.. for the time being!:) Blessings, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux

November 6, 2012 at 5:44 PM

Hello Hanitra Just a note to say hello, looking forward to you putting more of your poetry on line.

Richard Lamoureux

October 28, 2012 at 8:46 PM

I see you got your Boo on. I dont't want to get you mad. Fun poem.

Harry Horsman

October 25, 2012 at 4:04 PM

wow scary, interesting is this

Robert Johnson

October 24, 2012 at 10:06 AM

Just lay down and let it go. Just look in the mirror, it's telling you no. That hate for Nate will kill your spirit. Cause when you scream, no one will hear it. Tis the season for no reason, this hallowed out old cave. For revenge is only treason for what we should not crave. Have a lovely day Voahan. :)

Sara Kendrick

October 24, 2012 at 7:56 AM

Interesting..I thought that I remembered something similar..I thought well I must have read this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..What country are you from?Very long name..

Debra Squyres

October 24, 2012 at 5:19 AM

Not quite sure what to say about this...guess I'd have to read the other poem first. I often get inspired by other writers also....Have a blessed day !!

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