Still

I know how it feels, I been there before.
Don't wanna go to sleep, don't wanna wake up all alone.
I still want you.
The nights seem to last forever, seems the darkness never ends.
Tired wet eyes meet the sunrise, the heartache rebegins.
I still miss you.
First breath of the morning barely reaches the lungs, first glance in the mirror burns down to the soul.
I still need you.
Silent night, the lights go off. The heart starts longing, the tear drops start to fall.
I still love you.
It’s crazy how your image still takes my breath away, how my heart still pounds in desperation when I hear your name.
I still want you.
I try to clear my mind in the still of a moment but before I can do it your memory takes over.
I still miss you.
I need a familiar face, I feel so alone. The worst pain you can imagine and it can't be consoled.
I still need you.
As the sun begins to set I can feel that sunken breath. I’m forced to hold my composure until I'm alone in bed. 
I still love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/1/2020 6:11:00 PM
I loved this...and I like how you used them in order - want, miss, need, love.
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Date: 10/18/2012 5:39:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bessie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2012 1:44:00 PM
Nice piece but sad..Just keep Loving..in Time it may not be that bad..:)
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Date: 10/17/2012 1:17:00 PM
Bessie, still, still still,,, wow... still is all we got at times. Your emotions reminds me of my weak heart when it comes to my fiance. . Thank you for sharing your wonderfulness through poetry, take care :-) PD
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