Still

. S a d a n d d r i f t i n g But Standing on A Firm Foundation of Faith

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2009 6:47:00 PM

Soup reply Ms. Ginn...and keep the faith, friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/31/2009 5:27:00 PM

wow,i love this one,great-charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2009 8:23:00 AM

mail call begins...Ms Ginn....(I rhymed again...aren't I clever??)........

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/29/2009 3:09:00 PM

WELL...I NEVER!!.....I'll just have you know, Ms. Ginn...that I was the perfect child!!! (Yeah..right!)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/26/2009 6:02:00 AM

Laurie, thx for comments on thimbleberries, I have posted explanation of the berry on that poem's page if interested! Jim

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/24/2009 6:04:00 AM

Wow, talk about creative..This is beautiful and powerfully uplifting..We all need to stand on faith..No matter what we are going through in life, the only thing that will get us through it is faith...I pray that there are better days ahead for all of us..Stand tall and Stay strong Ms Ladeee..Always, Tyesha

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/21/2009 8:26:00 AM

ps...soup mail :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/21/2009 7:01:00 AM

Soup mail reply...Miss Ginn....(weird)

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/21/2009 1:11:00 AM

Nice structure and message...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/20/2009 6:24:00 PM

Dear Laurie, The second YOUR POEM "Still" hit the screen my eyes riveted to a set of stairs beginning with " Faith " leading on the pathway to Heaven A fantastic journey Thank- YOU LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/20/2009 1:16:00 PM

Excellent BIO Laurie! Your message is beautiful and your format is woderful and flowing. Excellent writing, my friend! Love, Robin

Ronald Bingham

Date: 3/20/2009 12:44:00 PM

There you go just when I thought you couldn't out do yourself you prove me wrong, God Bless, Ron

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/20/2009 10:16:00 AM

wow amazing write-- and such style--poetry truly in motion

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/20/2009 8:05:00 AM

Wonderful that your foundation is rooted in faith..love the layout of the piece..good work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2009 7:09:00 AM

A very creative work that speaks highly of your faith, Laurie. Love both the message and the unique layout!

Arany P.

Date: 3/20/2009 6:39:00 AM

well done! 'wow... this is excellent... brilliant!' my brother is like your his new fav after Robin!! i think he likes the presentation rather than the words i am his only sister and he has given up... Laurie you are stealing my only fan!! haha... anyway nice one! Laurie its faith that hold us up when everything else is falling!! lovely write! ~ Arany

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2009 6:28:00 AM

One thing I love about you, Missy Laurie...is that you don't post a poem unless it is first class...quality! Lovely message here...perfect layout....using capitols even emphasizes the message of your faith! :) Kudos!

John Rhinem

Date: 3/20/2009 6:22:00 AM

Smile~Wonderful write again dear gifted Laurie Ginn!!!:):) As long as You stand upon the foundation, there is 'nothing else to worry about within this life!!!:):) Great bit of wisdom and truth here Laurie!!!:):)~"Perfect!!!"~" Have A Very Blessed Day Dear Talented Lady, Bye!!!:):)

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 5:57:00 AM

Your faith and talent renders you beautiful. Sigh. This is extremely well presented and deeply felt. Love, Shar

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/20/2009 5:49:00 AM

This is great Laurie!! Really original and a great flow with an even greater message. I like how the poem's form really illustrates what you're saying... the "drifting" is looser and as the poem gets to the end, the foundation is more solid... so very cool and creative, and makes the point perfectly. I loved it! Love, Amy :)

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/20/2009 5:06:00 AM

Hehhh!! , Whats with the Multi-posting ??? .. 2 presentations , TOGETHER !!! Still , I have firm , faith in you , M/S Ginn ... !!!! ....

Diane Christian

Date: 3/20/2009 4:57:00 AM

what a wonderful poem, so well written I like the way it is formed, the storms of life will try to shake us but standing on our firm foundation of faith we might wobble but we will neevr fall, God bless from diane

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/20/2009 4:15:00 AM

wonderful! Laurie! my smile grew as the shape of the poem moved with the emotions expressed, very, very, cool!!!! original! love it! Jim