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Stiff Attention, For Contest

Bart Bren was a novice politician Who was fair at stating his position. But folk who wouldn't listen Caused a major transition. Bart found his audience as a mortician.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/10/2016 9:55:00 AM
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Awe you are so kind for your reply.... lol...however I have a new poem up, off the wall ... a little too much for the readers ... I'm glad anytime you stop by to say hi, and enjoy the adventures around my poem. Hugs
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:52:00 AM
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Paul, I really appreciate the time you took to comment one of my poems. Love LINDA
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/9/2016 10:12:00 PM
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You're more than welcome, Linda. Reading your poetry and then commenting on it is an awesome adventure in learning . . . it's a privilege that I cherish.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:51:00 AM
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hI PAUL, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2016 11:16:00 AM
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You bless me with your kind words. Thank you, Linda.
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 1/31/2016 9:02:00 AM
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Paul, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/31/2016 10:04:00 AM
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I appreciate and value your kind, encouraging comment, Hansteven. Thank you for stopping by with some supportive words.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 1/30/2016 3:29:00 AM
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Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick Paul..
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/30/2016 8:03:00 PM
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I appreciate and value your comment, Dr. Sharma. Your praise means a lot to me.
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Skat A
Date: 1/30/2016 2:34:00 AM
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Paul, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT **
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/30/2016 8:05:00 PM
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Thanks, SKAT A. It's sweet of you to extend congratulations. I'm grateful.
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2016 6:31:00 PM
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Great humour Paul This would have placed higher but the syllable count was slightly off in the final line. Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/30/2016 8:10:00 PM
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Thank you, Jan, my ever-supportive, dear friend. 'Tis a shame I have never learned to count.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2015 4:07:00 PM
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I thought maybe he would turn out to be a Simpson!! Anyway, loved the title meaning after I read the ending.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/27/2015 7:29:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea (you awesome poet). I value and appreciate your comment. . . . Every good wish for a glorious 2016.
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Mark Woods
Date: 12/25/2015 10:19:00 PM
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Haha. Maybe there's not much of a difference in the two occupations?
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/27/2015 9:31:00 AM
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Mark, thank your for your comment. I think you have a point.

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