Paul Schneiter Poet Limerick

Stiff Attention, For Contest

Bart Bren was a novice politician      
Who was fair at stating his position.    
But folk who wouldn't listen
Caused a major transition.
Bart found his audience as a mortician.

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Poet Destroyer A February 10, 2016 at 9:55 AM Awe you are so kind for your reply.... lol...however I have a new poem up, off the wall ... a little too much for the readers ... I'm glad anytime you stop by to say hi, and enjoy the adventures around my poem. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 11:52 AM Paul, I really appreciate the time you took to comment one of my poems. Love LINDA Paul Schneiter February 9, 2016 at 10:12 PM You're more than welcome, Linda. Reading your poetry and then commenting on it is an awesome adventure in learning . . . it's a privilege that I cherish.

Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2016 at 2:51 AM hI PAUL, Congratulations on your wonderful limerick win. Love Linda Paul Schneiter February 7, 2016 at 11:16 AM You bless me with your kind words. Thank you, Linda.

Hansteven Selfa January 31, 2016 at 9:02 AM Paul, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest! Paul Schneiter January 31, 2016 at 10:04 AM I appreciate and value your kind, encouraging comment, Hansteven. Thank you for stopping by with some supportive words.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 30, 2016 at 3:29 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick Paul.. Paul Schneiter January 30, 2016 at 8:03 PM I appreciate and value your comment, Dr. Sharma. Your praise means a lot to me.

Skat A January 30, 2016 at 2:34 AM Paul, Congrats on your LIMERICK win. ** SKAT ** Paul Schneiter January 30, 2016 at 8:05 PM Thanks, SKAT A. It's sweet of you to extend congratulations. I'm grateful.

Jan Allison January 29, 2016 at 6:31 PM Great humour Paul This would have placed higher but the syllable count was slightly off in the final line. Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Schneiter January 30, 2016 at 8:10 PM Thank you, Jan, my ever-supportive, dear friend. 'Tis a shame I have never learned to count.

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 4:07 PM I thought maybe he would turn out to be a Simpson!! Anyway, loved the title meaning after I read the ending. Paul Schneiter December 27, 2015 at 7:29 PM Thank you, Andrea (you awesome poet). I value and appreciate your comment. . . . Every good wish for a glorious 2016.

Mark Woods December 25, 2015 at 10:19 PM Haha. Maybe there's not much of a difference in the two occupations? Paul Schneiter December 27, 2015 at 9:31 AM Mark, thank your for your comment. I think you have a point.