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(a poem in Haiku and Senryu) Draw a stick figure future - sadly diminished and chaos ransomed. Paint the landscape with the sweltering glare of global warming. Add micro-plastic and forever chemical flavorings to taste. Come share this with me - let kisses heal and soft whispers inflame. Some locks need two keys to open, some heavens can be reached by mortals. . . A song for this: All Gone Away by The Style Council

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Date: 11/20/2024 1:21:00 PM
Some diversions are more worthy than others. Escape sounds nice
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Anais Vionet
Date: 11/20/2024 3:48:00 PM
It has its appeal.
Date: 11/20/2024 10:12:00 AM
Cool piece, AV. Love discoveries can be explosive or gentle nudging. :o))
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Date: 11/20/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, Ario =]. True.

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