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For The Premiere Contest, "Your City"
Sponsor, Christopher Delegans

Painting by Sandra M. Haight, of The Hasbrouck House at George Washington's  Headquarters, Newburgh, NY, reproduced from a postcard reference. It served as Washington's Headquarters during the last years of the Revolutionary War and was where he signed the Proclamation of Peace in 1783, ending the Revolutionary War.

Stepping Through Time

There on my wall, my painting of his home-
a piece of history from long ago.
I contemplate the image and at once,
as in a foggy dream, he steps outside
into my space, his hand outstretched to mine.
We dance the minuet;  he bows to me
with a brocade coat and white cravat of lace-
tall, impressive man with a powdered wig, 
a soft, bright twinkle in his dark blue eyes.

I wonder if he knows I live within
this town, where his headquarters were back then;
how celebrated was his presence here,
and how I now admire and study him,
who spent his time here in my town as our
First President of the United States.
George Washington twirls me around again...
kisses my hand, as I, with a curtsy, smile.
And then, at once, he glides back to his home.

I often think, if he came back again,
how he'd resolve the chaos of our times,
his spirit, having witnessed from above
all the disastrous choices leaders made,
and start from fresh with love-of-country heart...
begin again with 'gifts of hindsight' start.
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Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:04 AM
I'm sure things would be different if he stepped out and saw me. LOL. An excellent approach to this challenge with which I could do nothing. a 7
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thank you so much, Janis, for your nice comment and rating. (He would see an accomplished, outstanding retired teacher who is inspiring her readers with her well-written, insightful and powerful poetry!) Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 4:44 AM
This is superbly executed, Sandra:) loved your fantasy, a 7 each for your painting and your poem :)
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thank you so much, Jo, for your kind comment and the 7! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Your art and poem merge beautifully in this awesome write Sandra...
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Sandra
Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Excellent entry Sandra, lovely painting also. Congratulations for both...
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Sandra
Warrior Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Enchanted time Sandra...and great painting...a winner my friend for me...would have taken this one on, but have two left feet for dancing lol...god bless...^WW^
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much, Winged Warrior, for you uplifting comments. Sandra
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Basking in the glow of your charm, no doubt. I love your fantasy, Mrs Sandra. I wonder what he would think if he could see us today.
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comment, Daniel. I would hope he'd be proud of all the good things ;) Sandra
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