Stepping Outside

Walk,
and you 
get to see 
the real beauty 
of the world around 
you. Every time you use
your feet, not only are you
"walking on" history, but you 
are stepping to the future. Progress---
putting one foot in front of the other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Brandee, I loved this catchy poem. Congratulations on your great win! I do believe this is an Etheree poem, though it is marked as a Tetractys. Aloha, Connie
Thaker Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Inspirational!!!!!!!!!!Very impressive and congratulations!!!!!! vrushani!!!
K. Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 12:57 AM
This sure is a very motivational tetractys, Brandee! Really enjoyed reading this! Super congrats on your first place win :) -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations Brandee on your 1st Place win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:31 PM
VERY NICE, Congatultions on your big win, Brandee! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on taking first place with this terrific poem, Brandee! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Yes...indeed ...walking is the best form of transportation to really see the world! Well done! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:39 PM
Congrats on well deserved win, Brandee
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:22 PM
Congrats Brandee on your first place in BG's contest.. with this inspiring write on the benefits of walking.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem ..with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations on winning my first contest. soup mail BG
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 12:16 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Brandee. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Great piece Brandee and good luck in Jared's contest.. great look at the world and the way we all should look at it.. he will luv it and expect a winners notice my friend..with luv..
A   Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 4:25 PM
wonderful introspection,, lovely write,, enjoyed..P.D.
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