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Stepping On Something Sweet

Stepping on something sweet Quiet shades of twilight ushering in a sullen mist while hushed purple shapes cling like the jealous forlorn lover never letting go A tender whisper from some far off place of long ago tantalizes my soul with orange dreams A pas de deux of joy and pain spills from my nostrils across an ocher sky to the curtsy of black tulips All these things and a whip-poor-will too sally down to sweep me inside their cavernous mouth swallowing everything I am The hollowed echo of a bedroom door closing behind me mimicking the sound of institution

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Date: 11/14/2013 7:06:00 AM
WOW! Stunning images. Brilliantly written. Welcome to the soup!
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Date: 11/12/2013 8:37:00 AM
beautiful & stunning, Sonny , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/12/2013 3:43:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sonny ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 12:56:00 AM
beautiful, sweet and charming imagery, Sonny ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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