Stepping Into the Distant Past

" I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination...".
Too hesitant to enter,
I pause and ponder:
is this a place of wonder? 
What tempts me to open it?
Is it curiosity or desire,
and what lies beyond it?


The aged brown door decorated with brass painted in black,
has a distinctive Gothic style of a house of prayer standing yards from the bay;
will I find in the rear an altar made of marble
with an angel on each side guarding off evil?
Once inside that mysterious chapel, where monks venerated God, I must
follow it to where it leads me, neither fear nor superstition can frighten me!


If it has no bell-tower, where are the bells? Were they stolen to make swords? 
Was it destroyed by fire or by the enemy who was a heartless infidel?
It could be rebuilt and brought to the lost splendor of those amazing ages,
and to rebuild it from the ashes, only faith can induce such an ambitious will...
could I envision, perhaps a little too early, what a glorious sight it would be? 
And if peace is found here, I will dwell in it as they did praising God indefinitely.
    

Written By Andrew Crisci for Constance La France's Contest,
" Three Gems "
Form:  Rhyme
Written on 7/31/ 2011 
Deadline: Sunday August 20, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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La France Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations, Andrew on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem ~~
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Andrew. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:03 AM
Yours was very imaginative, Andrew. Hey, long time no see!! How have you been? Congrats on your wonderful win in this contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Congrats Andrew on your solid second place win with this fascinating poetry my friend..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Andrew make sure to post your name and the contest name and date written for competition luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:08 PM
magnificent arrangement and composition ..so enthralling to read Andrew..one of your very best my friend.. sparkling and dynamic words of presentation .. making me want to go through that door with u..luv..good luck in the contest...a wow winner...
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:18 PM
Beautiful verse, very clever and inventive write....God bless....old Jack
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