Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Crystalline

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- Step By Step -

all the steps a long life has required ~
                         sprouts are still growing in the cracks




              
                                            28.02.2023
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                             A New Crystalline - Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
                                  howmanysyllables.com - 17
                                     4th place in the contest

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Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 3:47 AM Such a creative work you have penned. Back with congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Good to see it on the winners' list. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 3:48 AM - Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin March 13, 2023 at 4:05 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet crystalline! Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 3:48 AM - Thank you very much, Tania :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 13, 2023 at 11:14 AM A lovely, meaningful poem. Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise. :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 1:18 PM - Thank you very much, Evelyn :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler March 13, 2023 at 7:33 AM Brilliant Anne-Lise. Congratulations! hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 7:36 AM - Thank you very much, Linda :) - hugs

Sotto Poet March 13, 2023 at 5:49 AM Back with congratulations on your contest win, Anne. Blessings Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 6:00 AM - Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 12, 2023 at 6:27 AM Lovely Poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 2:47 AM - Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs

Valsa George March 6, 2023 at 5:14 AM Love and intimacy will serve as eternal sunshine on our path. Well done, Smile. Blessings dear friend. Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM - Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

David Smith March 6, 2023 at 2:06 AM I fill my cracks up with small flowers or I did until my grandson came along and he became the bigger priority but here are signs that he could be grandads little crack filler, he is now 4 and keen to help. Great poem. ps we dodged the flooding where we live in Wainuiomata Lower Hutt NZ best regards as always David in NZ Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM - Thank you very much, David :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick March 5, 2023 at 1:21 PM We can't stamp out all the weeds, but by the time of old age we have conquer quite a few. I enjoyed reading this one and it reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my p age. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM - Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel March 3, 2023 at 10:51 PM Very sweet, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM - Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf March 2, 2023 at 7:32 PM Tender ... Poignant ... to be treasured! Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 8:07 AM - Thank you very much, Gershon :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis March 1, 2023 at 6:37 AM Inspiring, my dearest Anne-Lise. God bless you! Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 10:33 AM - Thanks, Demetrios :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 1, 2023 at 2:49 AM Lovely, Sunshine. Great poetry. Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:52 AM - Thanks, Victor :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham February 28, 2023 at 3:59 PM But a well worn path that brings wisdom and experience of life. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:48 AM - Thanks, Tom :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues February 28, 2023 at 12:14 PM Yup…love that second line! Yes, the cracks get filled over time. They are still there but become something amazing with the years. God bless! Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:48 AM - Thanks, Kim :) - hugs

Deb M February 28, 2023 at 8:32 AM Lovely asunshine….Debx Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:48 AM - Thanks, Deb :) - hugs

JC Brul February 28, 2023 at 6:47 AM What a profound image in just few words. Excellent Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:47 AM - Thanks, JCB :) - hugs

Sotto Poet February 28, 2023 at 6:13 AM Profound with wise thought, Anne-Lise. We should never lose hope in the darkest times. Good luck with the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:47 AM - Thanks, Las :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose February 28, 2023 at 5:50 AM In the heart we are eternal sunshines for each other dear, may you always feel like a flower in the garden of poetry, and an angel in mine, Love you xo Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 2:47 AM - Thanks, sweet friend :) - hugs

Daniel Turner February 28, 2023 at 5:18 AM Step on a crack, break your mother's back:) A childhood saying here in the US. This is a good one, Anne. Good luck:) Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2023 at 5:24 AM - It was an ugly saying... If she breaks her back you have to carry her for the rest of your life, Daniel :) - Thanks :) - hugs

John Lawless February 28, 2023 at 5:01 AM and they keep sayin': "C'mon Papa".... Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2023 at 5:04 AM - Take as much time as you need, Papa :) - Thanks, John :) - hugs