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I’m not the girl that I used be Why do you look at me like that? Where is that sparkle in your eyes? Do you not find me attractive? I’m still here Right here I’m still the same inside If you can't see that You might as well step aside 4-2-17 Alexis Y.

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Date: 4/19/2017 6:17:00 AM
Hello Alexis. Good Morning. You bet step aside. I love this. This is a little gem that speaks marvelously. This would be a grand motivational tool at shelters and yes anywhere for that matter. Have a wonderful morning. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/4/2017 10:16:00 AM
Oh, yeah, you are beautiful, and no need for another person to tell you that, dear Alexis:) a 7:)
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Date: 4/4/2017 4:59:00 AM
He should be looking at what lies within..Nicely penned Alexis
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:35:00 PM
Let a fella know, Alexis. Cool truth this power packed poem is. Strong, confident words from a real sista. Stellar poem, dear. A double 7 plus a fave. Love and hugs to you always.
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Date: 4/3/2017 11:55:00 AM
Your poem cuts through the wounds we wear as mementos and asks us to shuck this pain and forge on with life. Emile.
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Date: 4/3/2017 6:11:00 AM
That's telling them, I am still me, no matter what you see. Just be yourself my friend, you are beautiful just the way you are.
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Date: 4/3/2017 5:54:00 AM
That's my girl! Good for you my dear Alexis! The one who loves not our inner self is a person doesn't deserve our love! Lovely message. A 7!
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Date: 4/3/2017 2:39:00 AM
Lovely lovely lovely! I love to read nature poem.
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
Ah but a poet can always see the beauty, as I do in your words!!
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