Step Aside

I’m not the girl that I used be

Why do you look at me like that?
Where is that sparkle in your eyes?
Do you not find me attractive? 
I’m still here 
Right here 
I’m still the same inside
If you can't see that
You might as well step aside

4-2-17
Alexis Y.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ricci Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Hello Alexis. Good Morning. You bet step aside. I love this. This is a little gem that speaks marvelously. This would be a grand motivational tool at shelters and yes anywhere for that matter. Have a wonderful morning. Well done entirely.
Daniel Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Oh, yeah, you are beautiful, and no need for another person to tell you that, dear Alexis:) a 7:)
May Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:59 AM
He should be looking at what lies within..Nicely penned Alexis
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Let a fella know, Alexis. Cool truth this power packed poem is. Strong, confident words from a real sista. Stellar poem, dear. A double 7 plus a fave. Love and hugs to you always.
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Your poem cuts through the wounds we wear as mementos and asks us to shuck this pain and forge on with life. Emile.
Green Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 6:11 AM
That's telling them, I am still me, no matter what you see. Just be yourself my friend, you are beautiful just the way you are.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 5:54 AM
That's my girl! Good for you my dear Alexis! The one who loves not our inner self is a person doesn't deserve our love! Lovely message. A 7!
Muideen Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Lovely lovely lovely! I love to read nature poem.
Vaso Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Ah but a poet can always see the beauty, as I do in your words!!
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