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Stella not a gal yelled for in passion but a guy passionately painting my eyes go back and forth in lines and curlicues in lighting and floral propensity irises flicker voyaging North and South East and West without rest strange fountainlike fantasy links with my mind birds intertwine vanilla egrets alongside imitate the Madonna shape or three robins rest inside a pondlike flamingo blossom then into the future battle of lights Stella the guy sees the light I seize the light

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Date: 2/28/2025 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your winning poem with a memorable end line
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2025 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Frances!
Date: 2/25/2025 11:03:00 PM
Thought provoking piece! I really like the lines “without rest/ strange fountainlike/ fantasy” beautiful work with fun and evoking imagery… always, Laura
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2025 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 2/25/2025 8:30:00 PM
A head teaser. I remember Marlon's wonderful performance, his pigeon coop on the roof -- I lived a lot of that movie. He was a handsome actor. One had to be tough...and it wasn't easy to remain independent. Quite a poem. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2025 4:54:00 AM
lol…Thank you, Joe! My young grandson likes a girl called Stella so that also brought to mind the movie.
Date: 2/25/2025 11:01:00 AM
Raw sensuality - if that goes together, I really enjoyed reading your writing, it makes my head spin <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2025 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 2/25/2025 8:39:00 AM
What a creative write you have here. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2025 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!

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