Steering

steering away from the coast taking risks posted on September 11, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2019 7:18:00 AM

I am always doing this; made sense in about six different facets of myself.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 8:14:00 PM

I bet! It's never a dull moment with you, Caren.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/11/2019 8:16:00 PM

Love this poem, and Gershon's comment made me laugh... as my cart always steers itself toward aisle-lands far from my destination (like ice cream)! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 8:15:00 PM

LOL there are so many ice cream flavors, you have to do them all justice, Rhona!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2019 7:05:00 PM

A goofy thought came to me looking at this senryu. I can see steering through the aisles / 'aisle-lands' of opportunity in the grocery store or supermarket. LOL. Nice one, Line. ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2019 7:27:00 PM

VERY original, Gershon. Love those shopping lists of opportunities!!