This coming up week will be first day of fall. It isn't feeling like fall but I think it will get here soon. Hot and dry in my area.
Word based tanka. 3/5/3/5/5
steel gray clouds obscure clear, then red sunrise.... quiet peaceful morn earth nearly at autumnal equinox sun at noon directly south autumn's astronomical autumn in northern hemisphere, days shorter.... cooler nights delight rest inside by warm fire hot cocoa, buttered popcorn, read
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Word based tanka. 3/5/3/5/5