Steed On Fire

I held the reins tightly of the dark steed
His strength and power unlike any other
I had ever ridden upon. I kicked his flanks
And motioned him to jump the ravine a 
Sparse expanse of space for which his stealth
And vigor would most certainly propel us to the
Other side. He snorted loudly the haze of his nervousness
And his sidestep gait unsure of his own power. But
Again I kicked his flanks and pulled hard on the reins we charged
The ravine as if entering a invisible battle. Thwarting the
Enemies bullets and swords faster as if a fre were behind us.
The Steed charged forward and arched his front legs leaping into
The air as if a gazelle.  We were one, in that instant molded in a moment
Of time flying over the thunderous crashing river and boulders below. 
As gracefully as he had leaped we landed.  The Steed covered in white froth
And sweat.  But we were across the wide expanse and alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 11:36 AM
So imaginative! Full of riveting imagery and powerful phrasing. Tension and release... well done Kelli! Best wishes, Keith
Trifiatis Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:41 AM
A powerful write showing your poetic ability! Excellently done, dear Kelli!
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February 11, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much Dear Demetrios.
Turner Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Now you are getting kinky! LOL
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February 11, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Well I'm not a dark steed more like a slow stubborn jackass but I'm sure with you spurring my flanks I might not jump the ravine but I would go there and stay awhile no matter how long you spurred. LOL Love the poem, Kelli.
Turner Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Now your getting kinky!LOL
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February 11, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Hahaha. I'd have to use a cattle prod than Daniel. A little electric shock.
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February 10, 2016 at 12:40 PM
as a black man, I am considered a steed....as if my mother was raped by a horse, if you can believe....however, you CAN never ride better over a ravine that is wetter....I am just a freaky flirt, our words belong together....lol...."I had every ridden upon" took my mind all the way out there kelli....lol....but your work was very inspiring and Beautifully written....;)
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February 10, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Oh you are quite a rare gem Eric. If you could get me across the ravine I would mount you and kick your flanks too.
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