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When I was a child my world was new. And in my youth I knew not of conspiracy theories; social injustice, hatred, bigotry, or mistrust. Unconcerned with the reality others could see; those things remained invisible to me. When I started school full of pep and energy; I gradually lost what I held to be precious and irreplaceable. Time stole the one thing I could never regain; my innocence. And I felt its loss; as I entered my teens. Friends ridiculed me for how naive I had been to believe in Santa Claus, fairness, love, and the overall goodness of people. And so, time subsequently stole my trust; replacing it with cynicism, skepticism and self-interest. As I age, time keeps stealing bits and pieces of me; and inevitably, it'll rob me of life itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/16/2020 12:19:00 PM
Whoa!! There are still some good people and people who treat others in a good way. So don't lose faith.. Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 11/16/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I know that to be true, because I know you my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/16/2020 11:29:00 AM
aww such a touching piece, a friend asked me today if she should tell her daughter (who is now 10) about Santa as she is asking questions... I really enjoyed this poignant poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate all of your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2020 5:43:00 PM
Emile, so deep and poignant. It is always easy to relate to your writings, they are so genuine and from the heart and soul. Congratulations for your win, my friend ~ John
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Date: 11/16/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2020 5:16:00 AM
My favourite so far. Congrats.
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Date: 11/15/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2020 2:01:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 11/15/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the win my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/11/2020 5:02:00 AM
WOW! This is profound. Such a masterpiece and sure winner. I love it. God bless you with many more... And, I sent you Soupmail. Love and prayers
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Date: 11/11/2020 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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