Steadfast Sentinel

Wash over me, thundering, icy water
Under your salty lash I remain unfazed
Wash over me, midnight blue wave of terror
My purpose remains clear through the haze

Look unto me, bone-soaked and weary traveler
My blazing eye will warn you from destruction
Look unto me, brave and steadfast lightkeeper
Inside my walls, I will give you protection

Sustain me, oh beloved caretaker
On sunny days, polish the rust from my head
Sustain me, oh mason and painter
When I appear strong, it eases their dread

Again hit me, deepest waves surging tall
Your gritty surf and gales I’ve felt before
Again hit me, violent storms and squalls 
What doesn’t break me, readies me for more.

4/7/16
For Conest: Sentinel, Quatrain Form
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 26, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Great ending message Tom... Nice win. Linda
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April 26, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thanks, Linda!
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April 14, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Congratulations Tom on your win in the Sentinel contest. Great interpretation. Peace my friend:)
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April 18, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Thanks Daniel!
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April 9, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Wow! what a dramatic picture and the dramatic poem goes along with it, great poem for Eve's contest, good luck......Vera
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April 9, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Vera!
Onclaud Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 8:51 PM
powerful, decisive write that i truly enjoyed, tom..huggs
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April 8, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Nette!
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April 7, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Wonderful, Tom. I felt the wild forces of the storm and the firm strength of the lighthouse in your words. An excellent write for the contest. Sandra
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April 7, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
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April 7, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Great write Tom. No luck needed for this contest, Charlie
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April 7, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie!
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Fabulous descriptive imagery and personifcation - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 7, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Thanks, Jan!
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