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Steadfast Honeysuckle





They fell in love,

through the doorway of the eyes, as their souls
 communed. Silently, they speak in the language
 of soul and spirit. 
    Glimpses of this cadence, seen and heard 
in the plaintive hum and lamentation of 
bow pulled across strings, then pushed across to 
ground us in this world again.
    Soft drops of cool Summer rain drip from the clouds
 above, playing the land like a piano. 
    Tender, swollen lips meet no resistance.
 Each kiss wet with the slow, heavenly waterfall.
    Their passions stir, eyes, lips, hands
 caressing body and soul. Their tight embrace
 is not nearly close enough. They long, yearn, 
to become one, to complete the soul puzzle. 
    A warm wind picks up, pushing the rain sideways. 
Somewhere a lever is pulled with great strength
 and the skies open. The rain pounds now with
 the force of great war drums, forcing the
 tall green blades of grass to bow down in adoration. 
     As if they too were grass, knees weaken 
with need. They fall gently to the earth still in 
each others arms. 
    A frenzied feeding to match the rhythm of rain, 
on lips, tongue, and burning skin.
Thunder sounds, so close. A brilliant flash of lightening
 turns everything into a negative. As if God was
 preserving this moment of purity with a photo. 
            
Oh, how they fell in love!

    Rising, rising, reaching, giving themselves 
fully to the other. They become one. Singular in heart,
 body, and mind. 
    Bliss and peace was their youthful playground
 until they were cruelly separated by duty. 
Him, taken away, so far away, to protect family
 and freedom. 
    Anticipation became an addiction sustaining
 them…wishes, prayers, hope, and always love.
    Pleasure anticipated but never realized builds 
walls of bitterness and anger. She, a prisoner, 
her sorrows so consuming the air became thick 
with its black smoke of grief.  
                She couldn't breathe.
    Some say she wasted away, others that
 her heart just broke into a million pieces. 
Now, they lie together in the field of tall grass
 where they first held each other in love's embrace.
    A large pink honeysuckle grows there,
 the curving trunk rising up in an embrace 
resembling the two young lovers. The image
 made by a flash of lightning so long ago, and 
displayed with righteous pride. 
    Never losing its pink and white blossom
 through every season and storm, it remains 
steadfast as its roots gain nourishment in the soil 
of true love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Smith Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 10:59 AM
This is a challenge to poets everywhere to jump on board and keep romance alive for the next generation. Like the way you entangle your poem in the the beauty of nature and the connection between the flowers and the nature of romance. From this 70 year old hopeless romantic despite setbacks on the field of human endeavor. I am sure this poem will bring at least one reader to see the light and the need for a little dallying among the tulips and unleashing the poet within. David in NZ
Woods Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I love that you see a challenge here and now that you mention it, I agree! Ty for reading this, it's one of my favorites. Xoxo
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 8:15 PM
What a great poem and love story! through the doorway of their eyes, their souls communed. plaintive hum and bow across strings. not nearly close enough. god preserving with a photo. etc. etc. so poetic and moving. this is one of my favorite ones. playing the land like a piano. yearn to become one to complete the soul puzzle.
Woods Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Oh thank you so much David! I'm glad someone liked this so well... one of my favorite writes to date.:)xoxo
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I love to hear the sound of a violin. Not always sad. Yes, one can find true love with the sound of a violin. Play On... Have fun day writing away...............
Woods Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Paula! I enjoyed writing this one! Xo
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 7:12 PM
ohh, a smorgasbord of emotions filling me to the brim...we need more violins here, crissy!
Woods Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 6:54 AM
So glad the music and emotion came across through my words.. can never have enough violins! Ty for reading! Xo
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