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Sad violin tunes o heart of mine contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
They fell in love, through the doorway of the eyes, as their souls communed. Silently, they speak in the language of soul and spirit. Glimpses of this cadence, seen and heard in the plaintive hum and lamentation of bow pulled across strings, then pushed across to ground us in this world again. Soft drops of cool Summer rain drip from the clouds above, playing the land like a piano. Tender, swollen lips meet no resistance. Each kiss wet with the slow, heavenly waterfall. Their passions stir, eyes, lips, hands caressing body and soul. Their tight embrace is not nearly close enough. They long, yearn, to become one, to complete the soul puzzle. A warm wind picks up, pushing the rain sideways. Somewhere a lever is pulled with great strength and the skies open. The rain pounds now with the force of great war drums, forcing the tall green blades of grass to bow down in adoration. As if they too were grass, knees weaken with need. They fall gently to the earth still in each others arms. A frenzied feeding to match the rhythm of rain, on lips, tongue, and burning skin. Thunder sounds, so close. A brilliant flash of lightening turns everything into a negative. As if God was preserving this moment of purity with a photo. Oh, how they fell in love! Rising, rising, reaching, giving themselves fully to the other. They become one. Singular in heart, body, and mind. Bliss and peace was their youthful playground until they were cruelly separated by duty. Him, taken away, so far away, to protect family and freedom. Anticipation became an addiction sustaining them…wishes, prayers, hope, and always love. Pleasure anticipated but never realized builds walls of bitterness and anger. She, a prisoner, her sorrows so consuming the air became thick with its black smoke of grief. She couldn't breathe. Some say she wasted away, others that her heart just broke into a million pieces. Now, they lie together in the field of tall grass where they first held each other in love's embrace. A large pink honeysuckle grows there, the curving trunk rising up in an embrace resembling the two young lovers. The image made by a flash of lightning so long ago, and displayed with righteous pride. Never losing its pink and white blossom through every season and storm, it remains steadfast as its roots gain nourishment in the soil of true love.

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Date: 12/4/2024 10:59:00 AM
This is a challenge to poets everywhere to jump on board and keep romance alive for the next generation. Like the way you entangle your poem in the the beauty of nature and the connection between the flowers and the nature of romance. From this 70 year old hopeless romantic despite setbacks on the field of human endeavor. I am sure this poem will bring at least one reader to see the light and the need for a little dallying among the tulips and unleashing the poet within. David in NZ
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/5/2024 8:34:00 AM
I love that you see a challenge here and now that you mention it, I agree! Ty for reading this, it's one of my favorites. Xoxo
Date: 9/23/2024 8:15:00 PM
What a great poem and love story! through the doorway of their eyes, their souls communed. plaintive hum and bow across strings. not nearly close enough. god preserving with a photo. etc. etc. so poetic and moving. this is one of my favorite ones. playing the land like a piano. yearn to become one to complete the soul puzzle.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
Oh thank you so much David! I'm glad someone liked this so well... one of my favorite writes to date.:)xoxo
Date: 9/23/2024 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I love to hear the sound of a violin. Not always sad. Yes, one can find true love with the sound of a violin. Play On... Have fun day writing away...............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/26/2024 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Paula! I enjoyed writing this one! Xo
Date: 8/14/2024 7:12:00 PM
ohh, a smorgasbord of emotions filling me to the brim...we need more violins here, crissy!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/15/2024 6:54:00 AM
So glad the music and emotion came across through my words.. can never have enough violins! Ty for reading! Xo
Date: 8/14/2024 5:35:00 AM
Whew! Is it getting hot in here or just me? This is quite epic in feel Crys. It's got everything, the heat of passion amidst a raging storm, heartbreak and finally unity in oblivion. If this doesn't place I don't know what will
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/14/2024 1:36:00 PM
Check your soupmail crys
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/14/2024 1:13:00 PM
Yay! I'm so glad someone finally read it! I was super excited by this...I don't normally LOVE my own writing but I really liked this one. I did repost since no one had seen it yet...I think I posted on a day I posted a few others. Tysm for commenting Tom it means so much! Xi
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/14/2024 6:29:00 AM
Btw, is this a repost or edit? I could swear I saw this title before
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