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Staying By You

Just acting strong I was When everything looks more than worse But I am me! I show no remorse I laugh, I play and taunt of course But that's for you And i don't think you can see it too When you are down And am down Who will then pick you up? When you are falling And am falling Then don't we have the same destiny? Oh one of mine, When you are falling, I can pretend am hung And grab your hand as you sunk When you are down, I can pretend to be on my knee Crawling up to you and pulling up your glee It may be hard doing but you already soothe It may be tough, but your heartbeat made my fears mute I will be there at night, to watch your moony face as you smile- In a dream which makes you happy I will be there in the day, to watch your lips strike- Together with words that express your deepest feelings But before that promised night, and before that day By your side I will forever stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/11/2016 6:33:00 AM
A really elegant and confident, personality-imbued piece White. A lovely sweeping ending as well. A genuinely engaging take on the saturated themes of partnership.
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:44:00 PM
love's strength is great...thanks for coming by Michael
Date: 1/10/2016 1:19:00 PM
Very nice pen WS! A 7!I wish you Very Happy n' Prosperous New Year in 2016!:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:45:00 PM
thanks Dorian, am glad you like it, well wishes to you too
Date: 1/8/2016 2:06:00 PM
Lovely and tender poetry, nice one ~~ James :)
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Date: 1/8/2016 2:13:00 PM
thanks James...
Date: 1/8/2016 3:16:00 AM
White Sage, when love melts our very hearts even the extraordinary things we can do just for the ones we love.. =`) love is so obvious in the lines.. the shift of the feelings and message is done smoothly. =`)~Olive ELoisa =`0
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:15:00 AM
Date: 1/7/2016 5:54:00 PM
Oh my dear this is so sweet and lovely , I'm captured by this romantic poem ,one of my Favorites , I'm leaving ur page with my heart hanging here , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:59:00 PM
am glad you left something very precious by me, glad....thanks dear Dalia

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