Staying Afloat

When doors close, there's more to it than denying you access to what’s inside. We often think that what’s inside is something we cannot live without.
So we feel disappointed, disillusioned, dispossessed, disabled, depressed.
Sometimes, we are overwhelmed, feeling shut out, as if no other doors exist.

Often, it takes a little time, the kind that heals all wounds, as new doors open.
Coveted things inside the closed door loses their appeal as we were healed.
We discovered our life’s purpose down the hall or across the street;
Our phone rang with a new opportunity, as we sat  for a bite to eat.

Some doors are meant to be shut, because there is nothing for us inside.
At first, it’s painful to the face; but later we realize our life has meaning.         So we lift our heads with that same face, and smiling we say, “Thank you”.
“Thank you”, because often, only ‘doors in your face experiences’ can bring epiphany.

A job change left me away from my family, living on a borrowed 50 foot boat.
One stormy El Nino night, I rocked and rolled; by God’s grace I stayed afloat.
Life’s not always a treat, nor is it a retreat on a sunny beach;                       but life will always reach out its hands, offering to teach.
03222016 PS Contest, When A Door Closes, by Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/6/2016 11:13:00 PM
another nice win, Curtis. -pd
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Date: 4/5/2016 6:02:00 AM
Hi Curtis, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. A seven from me my friend....Mike.
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Date: 4/4/2016 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations Curtis, a most deserved win...
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 4/4/2016 9:49:00 PM
Charlie. Thank you kindly.
Date: 4/4/2016 9:01:00 AM
Your works are truly heartfelt Curtis! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Hansteve.
Date: 4/4/2016 3:08:00 AM
Greetings Curtis. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 4/4/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thank you for your compliment Teddy.
Date: 4/4/2016 3:04:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful top podium with this very awesome poem curtis..
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 4/4/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma. I am honored by your words.
Date: 4/4/2016 12:01:00 AM
Many congrats Curtis - life does have a way of rocking the boat but as long as we stay afloat that is the important thing:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:13:00 PM
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan.
Date: 4/3/2016 7:11:00 PM
Curtis, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
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