Staying Afloat

When doors close, there's more to it than denying you access to what’s inside. We often think that what’s inside is something we cannot live without.
So we feel disappointed, disillusioned, dispossessed, disabled, depressed.
Sometimes, we are overwhelmed, feeling shut out, as if no other doors exist.

Often, it takes a little time, the kind that heals all wounds, as new doors open.
Coveted things inside the closed door loses their appeal as we were healed.
We discovered our life’s purpose down the hall or across the street;
Our phone rang with a new opportunity, as we sat  for a bite to eat.

Some doors are meant to be shut, because there is nothing for us inside.
At first, it’s painful to the face; but later we realize our life has meaning.         So we lift our heads with that same face, and smiling we say, “Thank you”.
“Thank you”, because often, only ‘doors in your face experiences’ can bring epiphany.

A job change left me away from my family, living on a borrowed 50 foot boat.
One stormy El Nino night, I rocked and rolled; by God’s grace I stayed afloat.
Life’s not always a treat, nor is it a retreat on a sunny beach;                       but life will always reach out its hands, offering to teach.
03222016 PS Contest, When A Door Closes, by Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 6, 2016 at 11:13 PM
another nice win, Curtis. -pd
Raven Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Hi Curtis, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. A seven from me my friend....Mike.
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations Curtis, a most deserved win...
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Charlie. Thank you kindly.
Selfa Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Your works are truly heartfelt Curtis! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Hansteve.
Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Greetings Curtis. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you for your compliment Teddy.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:04 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful top podium with this very awesome poem curtis..
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma. I am honored by your words.
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Many congrats Curtis - life does have a way of rocking the boat but as long as we stay afloat that is the important thing:-) hugs jan xx
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thanks so much Jan.
Scars Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Curtis, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Johnson Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Laura.
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