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Stay with me!
Don't let go
I won't let you go
Breathe!
Please! !
     I can feel a pulse
     It's faint 
Continue compressions!! 1000,2000
Ambu bag - resuscitate
Push meds
Still no pulse
Continue! ! Repeat!
Don't change color on me
I value you, no blue
You have no clue
I can't watch this, I can't see you like this
Now I have to make that decision?!
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2015 8:48:00 AM
Real drama. Great write, njeri. Viv x
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 5:44:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Viv for this visit. Good day.
Date: 3/23/2015 8:10:00 AM
wow heart stopping piece excellent pen njeri
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 5:41:00 AM
Thank you Liam for this visit. Good day.
Date: 3/23/2015 6:50:00 AM
Intense! My husband is an emt. Great write
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/23/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Anna. This is dedication to EMT' s for they work so hard.

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