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May- 18- 2026

Actualization of Affection Poetry Contest

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Stay with me

Once our love was so luscious and fragrant like lilac And we glided through life’s waves as in a kayak Softly singing sweet duets, we danced in delight With tender touches, we turned doubt into might. We were then a pair of floating and soaring doves Warming on wintry days under weathered wooden eaves Once we used to sway and swirl in pleasure, In synchronized steps to the rising and lilting measure. But how soon I lost the rhyme n’ rhythm of life Dropped into a weary world with worries rife, I became a deflated and decimated balloon A broken reed, hard to be brought back to tune I had no clue why you had so hastily and stealthily left me I found myself drowning in a dreary sea I have been under despondent delusion and deep despair Thought, our love was cracked and wrecked beyond all repair Until you let me know what had transpired behind the scene And told, you still love me and look longingly to make me your queen To keep everything a sweet surprise for me and for everyone, You went to a far foreign land for a living, but had none On false charges, got detained and delayed in a refugee camp Where you had access to none, was taunted and treated like a tramp Now that you have a decent job and can stand on your feet You would come to take me as your wife and would soon retreat Now I count my days and weave dreams on dreams Of the time you will come to darn the torn and tattered seams And proudly proclaim once more in my attentive ear That you are my devout darling, my legitimate lover Once you come, stay with me and let us sip love’s sweet elixir Never let me fall into despair’s dirty hold and make me shiver Stay with me, stitching my shattered soul into a complete whole Together let us tread tireless, holding hands and move to our goal.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 2:14 PM
Congrats in the contest. Looks like you scored high. Great and descriptive story telling, Valsa
Guptar Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your high placement in this contest with a lovely emotive poem packed with feelings, with flowing rhythm and nice rimes , with sweetness of life and love turning sour and back to delight again. Wishing you a cheerful day.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:35 AM
Congrats on your win, Valsa! Beautiful lines and sentiment!
Empress Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 10:34 AM
Dear Valsa, sweet soul, youv played around with words so exquisitely here and delivered something so soulfully moving and poignant, flowing with so many emotions! I especially love the rhythm of your rhymes and how well youv articulated your lines, that keeps the readers hooked feeling the essence of your poem so very deeply! Thank you for supporting and for sharing this for my prompt. Pleasure placing this on top. Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:02 PM
sweet and lovely <3
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:38 PM
Valsa, this beautiful love story written in the most exquisite rhythm and rhyme, is incredible. How sad and precious, and seems true to life, that such could happen. It makes me think about the lovers who surely have been unjustly separated in various scenarios even in our present age. In the learning of the reason of the absence, there now stitches hope into the tapestry of despair with the bright color of a golden thread; hope in glorious reunion! I have to FAVE this poem, it is incredible <3
Rolland Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:35 PM
wonderful poem, you touched my soul wishes
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Stay with me" write. Love your line, "Now I count my days and weave dreams on dreams." In life how many times do we do this??? "Good Luck" I did, "Storm Of Roses Rage." Have a blessed/great day writing away.............
Narain Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 9:53 AM
Nice heartfelt poem. Hope you find happiness soon. I have learnt to behappy in solitary confined life.
Rodgers Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Dear Valsa, your muse carries a soul that the world tried to shut. I felt the sorrow of that long separation, the way hope dimmed yet refused to die. And then, this return, truth revealed, this vow reborn, where despair blooms into a beautiful devotion. Amen! Blessings, Daniel
DiMino Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:10 AM
"With tender touches, we turned doubt into might." -- Love that! Yes, situations are not always what they seem on the surface. We tend to overwrite both pleasures and defeats. The first can be selfishly unrealistic, and the second can be foolishly tragic. That is why when on human shaky grounds good to carry a portable God. If for a contest, best of luck. A very touching and honest write. Compelling poetry.
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