Stay True To You Be Your Own

When the first man left the trees for the cave,
did those men in the trees think him crazed,
as he grazed land did they look on amazed,
why leave your known home and natural place?

Overtime trees unclimbed were left behind,
with the duties of limbs reassigned, 
thrive in an unknown world they find,
cus one soul braved the unknown blind.

Actions against instinct presumably bad,
perceived as life threatening totally mad,
the unnecessary those before never had,
reasons for the existence we now have.

There's comfort when sticking with the known,
be brave with courage and go it alone.
The first to crawl from water or have flown
shaped destiny, live true to you be your own.

"You did what he did and he did what she did,
that's how the sheep live, look how the sheep live.
Give roots to the path not yet routed,
you did what you did and he did what he did".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 7:23 AM
- Love the title and the last verse, Nick ... but, sheep (like animals) are not stupid :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 16, 2019 at 11:27 AM
:)
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June 16, 2019 at 10:05 AM
I must admit that one line stood out to me too, I was going to change it but wasn't sure, your constructive criticism has paid off and i'm thankful, i've changed it now, thanks anne lise :)
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June 13, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Route is pronounced the same as root, Americans say it wrong
Michael Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 12:48 PM
This is good...Nice style too...All the best Nick
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June 13, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Thank you Arturo, all the best to you too
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