Reposting this, edited a little.
It's one of the first poems I posted on Soup and I am wondering what people now think of it. I wrote it about a year ago, and it's also one of the first poems I wrote in English.
STAY THERE AND DO NOT SET ONE STEP MORE Tentatively I set one step He lands me on the floor I'm scared I WARNED YOU, TO YOUR ROOM And I obey Frightened to the core Because every single word that's said Is only spoken inside my head *** August, 2016 Copyright © Darren White
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