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frosty winds whispered warning to early blossoms your time has not come stay hidden until bidden winter still rules in the glen

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White Sage

Date: 3/19/2016 4:09:00 AM

if the blossoms are ready to take a risk, they can try blooming, i heard risks bring a better income in business lol...excellent Lin, excellent, the fact that you write on various themes, excellent, the fact that you write different forms, excellent, the fact that your muse is always extraordinary, it is fantastically super awe-excellent (am not sure if that combination exist though, but if it does you do deserve it)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/19/2016 7:28:00 AM

You are a poet, and as such you have the artistic license to make up any word you choose. Awe-excellent is as good as any, and I thank you for liking it so well.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/8/2016 11:13:00 AM

This is amazing, a tanka on climate change. and you do it so well in so few words..

Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2016 11:34:00 AM

Your comment is very complimentary, Harry, and much appreciated.