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Stay Hidden

frosty winds whispered
   warning to early blossoms
      your time has not come
         stay hidden until bidden
             winter still rules in the glen

naturetanka

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White Sage

March 19, 2016 at 4:09 AM

if the blossoms are ready to take a risk, they can try blooming, i heard risks bring a better income in business lol...excellent Lin, excellent, the fact that you write on various themes, excellent, the fact that you write different forms, excellent, the fact that your muse is always extraordinary, it is fantastically super awe-excellent (am not sure if that combination exist though, but if it does you do deserve it)

Lin Lane

March 19, 2016 at 7:28 AM

You are a poet, and as such you have the artistic license to make up any word you choose. Awe-excellent is as good as any, and I thank you for liking it so well.