Stay Away

You hugged me My body stayed stiff Not ready to forgive

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/30/2014 7:43:00 PM

Lol at andrea's comment, my mind went there too, how bad is that?!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2014 8:15:00 AM

It amused me as well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2012 10:47:00 AM

I have a joke to say here, but I will refrain myself. I enjoyed this one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2012 12:48:00 PM

I think I get your drift ha ha!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/28/2012 5:47:00 PM

well-said

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2012 6:15:00 PM

Thank you Vesna. I appreciate you dropping by.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/28/2012 9:31:00 AM

Richard,this has happened over and over in life ,many people will tell you so if asked.Great Senryu !! A Haiku is always about nature .I will read more of your work ,I like this one. well said.Anne