Staving

staving off my sleep it wanders thru the night a mind of its own AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on January 27, 2020

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Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 2/1/2020 12:18:00 AM

I like the depth paired with simplicity.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/1/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, JR.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/30/2020 5:03:00 AM

Brilliant Senryu, Line, I often wonder what mine gets up to . . . ; )

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2020 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, Indiana. I know what you mean.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/30/2020 1:51:00 AM

MIND HAS ITS OWN WAYS OF LIVING, SOMETIMES IS APART FROM US THIS WAY WANDERS LOOKING ANSWERS OF ITS OWN... smart poetry dear Line salute alkas

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2020 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Alkas.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/28/2020 4:19:00 PM

Interesting, the mind is a creature of its own while we sleep, that could an interesting write

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2020 10:10:00 PM

And you would be the one to write a good one, Timothy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2020 11:29:00 AM

My mind is trying to digest this but we did not get enough sleep last night.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2020 6:18:00 PM

Get to bed early tonight, Caren. LOL

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/27/2020 10:30:00 AM

good one Line... the mind will always roam about... hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Sandra.