Statuesque

now without leaves
empty trees pose,
then freeze..on pause
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 4:17 AM
Brian, this is beautiful and a great example of this interesting form I have never heard of before or written.
Strand Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thanks Constance,the form was subject to a contest a while back (as per comments below)
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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November 17, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Late congrats on your well deserved win, dear Brian! Best, iolanda
Maverick Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Pleased to read your winning entry Brian..
Richards Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 8:48 AM
This is, I think, my favorite of all of these Than-Bauk poems....a lovely poem!! Congratulations, Brian!
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:14 AM
Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Brian
Johnson Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 7:13 PM
A truly nice one. Congratulations. Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:16 PM
This is so fitting with the title you gave it, Brian. NIcely done and nicely won!
Devonshire Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Oh, this is a brilliant than-bauk, Brian. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Great imagery that sets the mood. Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:40 AM
a gliterring write, brian.. you spoil me with such solid imagery with an element of surprise in the end... riight on cue!...greaat job!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Awesome write! Enjoyed reading your work today!----Lori
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