William Kelii Kekaula Poet Dizain

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State of Grace

*Image of Chicago Med by Wolf Entertainment.

State of Grace

bequeath I, as a living sacrifice,                                 
     beseech mercy from my iniquities,                        
          betold yon Calvary He paid the price,               
               bestow afresh trust from antiquities,           
          bare inhibitions and obliquities, 

boost soul midst clemency and gratitude,                    
     behold keen I stayed grasped in rectitude,             
          blessings prevail harmonizing my life,                
               betroth my soul justly in servitude,               
                    beckons me gladly to the afterlife.           

#4. State of Grace

2020 August 08
*1st Place*
Pick-A-Title, Vol 21 - Dizain
~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2020 August 19

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V. Deepa August 26, 2020 at 10:43 PM Hello William sir, A state of Grace... brilliantly penned poem:-) Each lines showcases pain blended beautifully with faith.. I liked the displayed pic and loved listening to the voice clip too.. Congratulations on your top win.:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us. Take care.Warm regards from Deepa:-) William Kelii Kekaula August 26, 2020 at 11:07 PM Blessings upon you and your household, Deepa, may the Lord shine upon your countenance, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Jan Allison August 20, 2020 at 10:07 AM beautifully expressed, many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2020 at 11:13 AM I appreciate your considerations, Jan, stay well and Aloha! William

Anisha Dutta August 19, 2020 at 9:38 PM BIG CONGRATS to win Top with Big 'B's. So many majestic words to glorify. Blessing. William Kelii Kekaula August 19, 2020 at 10:33 PM An opened-heart towards your thoughtfulness, Anisha, many thanks indeed, stay safe and Aloha! William

John Watt August 19, 2020 at 5:42 PM Beautifully composes statement of faith, William. I love the format, the B-words starting each line, the overall tone of faith and some impressive words along the way! Congrats on a #1, a well-earned win ~ John William Kelii Kekaula August 19, 2020 at 6:03 PM 'Tis an early walk with mom through God's acre that inspires, John, your words are indeed heartfelt, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Edward Ibeh August 19, 2020 at 4:52 PM Spectacular penning, William!:-) Heartiest congratulations for your top win in my contest! William Kelii Kekaula August 19, 2020 at 5:09 PM Truly feeling blessed, Edward, I am humble to this, stay well my friend, Aloha! William