Starting Trouble

I remember the day, when I wrote my first verse!
Writing a poem was not at all a matter of business for me,
And it wasn’t a colossal chore when my master asked me to write one;
But, in veracity I have ever written none.

Pondering on great poetic legends and their near and dears…
Their prodigious thoughts crammed my wits-
Then my proceedings seemed as if they are gliding higher than the clouds-
I’m all set and clear nearly for hours.

Then my sister scoffed at me, brother mocked with her,
Granny chuckled, grandpa giggled and of course there was a silencer!
Amazed, to get appraisal even before I moved further;
After all those are initiatives for an up-and-coming writer.

I astounded that I too got critics, but it made me to go on;
Puzzled to find out what they actually mean;
But it made me to climb that unclimbed mountain;
And fasten my mission.

Then with loads of coolness, I took my wand
To wave her magical spell for my deed;
Everything went impeccably organized
Until I got a doubt how to get it started… …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/6/2024 11:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:40:00 PM
NANTHINII MOHAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
NANTHINII, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:56:00 AM
Well done, truly enjoyed this morning...luv shannon
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Date: 9/30/2011 1:50:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Nanthinii. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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