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Starting To Feel Jazzy

The heart of a lion The soul of a flea The energy of a gnat Please do not let this be me Reaching into my junk drawer I pick up three items that give me glee A candy bar wrapper, And a playing card with a decorated bee. Dragons in my undercarriage, Dolphin party in the sea, This poem is starting to feel jazzy, It is lively, and it’s free. I line up the unicorns, Who are laughing at my knee. They ask Trixie to join them, So she dances away with thee. Her underling muses Chip and Dale come running to me. They are dying to write a poem, So we line up the junk items three. Let’s make it funny, says Chip A cut up we all agree. But Dale wants a sad poem, So we begin to disagree. Trixie's assistants laugh at my consternation And run away you see, So this is the end of the poem, Which made me yell a “whee!”

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Date: 12/20/2019 1:08:00 PM
Is there anything you don't think of? This was peppy!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:24:00 PM
I loved rereading this one as I had forgotten I ever wrote it.
Date: 12/12/2019 2:00:00 PM
This was a blast, so creative and spontaneous. Loved this Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Chris. When I get on a tear to just have FUN I love them the best.
Date: 12/12/2019 9:35:00 AM
This my friend, was both the sugar and the cream in my coffee this morning. Blessings on your day. Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I had fun with it!
Date: 12/12/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fun poem Caren! Great one :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 12/12/2019 4:49:00 AM
Oh this poetic cutie of a muse beauty is so irreverent funny, Caren! It brought a big smile to me face. Wide open space thoughts, I gleefully embrace. As do I this delightful poem. Love and peace forever.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:13:00 AM
I am glad you read it. Thanks for the comment Freddie.
Date: 12/12/2019 4:02:00 AM
lol I loved it. Its fun to have fun when your writing :) thanks for sharing Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 10:13:00 AM
If it's not fun, I will stop doing it.

Book: Shattered Sighs