Sara Kendrick Poet Limerick

Start To Fawn

There once was a man right at dawn
That took a long whiz on the lawn
Hairy whizzed on the top
Didn't know when he'd stop
Hard to tell who would start to fawn  

Just trying to get Hairy to go outside for his business>>>>LOL

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Jack Horne November 21, 2015 at 3:47 PM LOL, I can picture this

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2015 at 7:40 PM haha, just seeing your reply to me. I was thinking Hairy was the name of the man!! Guess i did not pay attention to the footnote. oh my!

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2015 at 3:28 PM Sara, I really liked this. the meter was perfect until last line. I think if you did a super funny last line, this would be your best limerick ever! Sara Kendrick November 6, 2015 at 4:28 PM Start to fawn means being subservant to...Was the dog going to win or was the man???Sara...It is a man thing..They will understand..