Starstruck In Your Deep Beauty

In your beauty, striking jewels within your light 
If I where to go into another world 
Searching behind each and every fold 
Wrapped up inside my mind 
There is a never ending vision, of thought 
Over half of it one forgets 
in a short space me not 

Flowering time one stands out striking 
It draws from the gentle wishing well 
inside the rainbow colors her 
all shades of a promise 
sprinkling softly in her mist 

The heart began singing music to me 
as the soul saw your guiding light 
I would never break your heart love 
one silent promise, made into oneself 
at that very moment in time 

I felt it 
so very special 
remembering the sweet pretty birds in song 
Magic capturing that very moment 
our souls inside out sharing 
When the heart fell at your feet 
it was truly amazing 

You're my dove wings 
sweetly touching 
Flying this heart deeply in love 
with your peace the drunken spirit is floating 
intoxicated in your space 
falling softy emotions swoon 
Savoring feelings explode outside reality 
your amazing beautiful in my eyes 
dazzling the mirrors of dream

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Date: 10/30/2014 1:45:00 AM
Deeply passionate write Liam, written with the beauty and grace of an eagle in flight. Applause! Hope you are doing well my friend. Sarai
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/30/2014 3:28:00 AM
smiling sarai your so sweet thank you for bringing a smile to my face dear friend such a beautiful comment touched me deeply bless you
Date: 10/23/2014 8:28:00 AM
It may be a love-poem or a poem of devotion. I think, liam, there is no interface between the two. One trickles to other. A very good poem, liam, bless----rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 11:53:00 AM
rajad it has both love and devotion in this one goes with the other without question of a doubt wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated thank you kindly
Date: 10/23/2014 8:05:00 AM
Very passionate and romantic work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 11:48:00 AM
sara always a pleasure reading your work thank you kindly for the warm comment deeply appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/23/2014 7:44:00 AM
Love: God of inspiration supreme that makes every heart to unfold its wings and soar to heaven of bliss, my friend Liam! You have managed it therefore a seven the least of rewards!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 11:23:00 AM
oh alone you believe in all sorts of dreams embraced with love heartfelt warm beautiful comment demetrios floating you a smile bless you
Date: 10/23/2014 3:34:00 AM
a favourite
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 10:55:00 AM
thank you charmaine heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/23/2014 3:33:00 AM
An amazing and beautiful poem Liam
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:40:00 PM
Striking poem Liam,... :D! wow..!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 3:30:00 AM
wonderful comment olive dazzling warm thank you deeply dear friend
Date: 10/22/2014 7:16:00 PM
Adding this one to my fav list ..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 3:28:00 AM
robert you are so sweet thank you from the heart touching deeply brought tears bless you dear friend
Date: 10/22/2014 7:15:00 PM
A jewel my friend. A heart melting poem for sure.. I hope you have a lady to gift this majestic write to my friend.. Solid 7.....
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Date: 10/22/2014 4:59:00 PM
Liam . . . Me Irish Mate!! And so this is one you were talking about. A most definite "7" here from me. And this one is a FAV poem too. (NOTE: I will be working on our latest co-write tomorrow as it is close now to the "wee hours of the morning," and will be getting back to you tomorrow.) The imagery you've employed in your write here has left me "Starstruck" as well. Deeply descriptive with your trademark mastery of the right words at the right place and right time. Excellent!! Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/22/2014 5:12:00 PM
nice to see you gary no hurries pal yeah it took me a while to put my heart and soul into this piece over a week i worked on this one thank you so kindly for your beautiful heartfelt comment bless you
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