STARS SPARKLING SATIN WATER

Standing with feet spread and arms opened wide,
I give myself to the beauty of this ocean night.
Though at a calm inlet’s entrance, my ears bear
witness to near crashing waves focusing their roll.

My solitude loves ocean sounds as favored music
while I absorb comfort from stars so brightly lucid.
Consolation is no illusion, night invites my intrusion,
calms my confusion and lifts all my cares on high.
In daylight, I hide, keep fears inside my weep
until the world sleeps and I may dare sneak
to the freedom of infinite sky and sea.
Placing my float upon the water, I then lay
face up, give way to the inlet to steer my coast
and to stars sparkling endless dreams evoked.
I dangle my fingers in the satin water ripple,
sigh as night upon water eases all of ill fashion
and natural darkness washes me with peace.
I am grateful to night for its water cradle,
for clear dark sky where angels sparkle stars
until all twinkles sigh signal away my fears.

Though I must depart the night’s embrace I lust
before the daylight begins its revealing start,
I stay prayerful for the night and water pattern
that stroke me with hope while afloat their passion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Dear CayCay, it's a pleasure to return once again to reread this soulful poem. I adore the atmospheric, sensory and emotional imagery. So beautiful! I'm honored to share the podium with you, my dear poet friend. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Godwin Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Susan. Have you ever read one of your own poems and thought, 'wow, really, I wrote this? me?' That's my reaction to this poem every time I read it. As always, I embrace your comment prose and hold your words close. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Miller Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 7:18 AM
This is beautiful CayCay, congratulations
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, Terry. It's one of my personal favorites and that means when I read it, I wonder who wrote this poem? I think you'd get a kick out of 'Fall Years are Beautiful' due to my ASSUMPTION (oh, no, an assumption) that you, too, are in your 'fall'. (my pics 2020) Anyway, poetry hugs ... CayCay
Toney Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 3:04 PM
CayCay, beautiful imagery and word choice. Your rhymes are sublime. You’ve reminded me how therapeutic an ocean vacay can be! A Fave poem. Congratulations on your top-10 finish on Mile 5 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, since Mile 6 has already started. You can find your overall standing in my Mile 5 blog post.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Great imagery, Caycay. I love this one. It reminds me of one I entered for one of the marathons and it won, so hopefully this one will win too. I love how it begins, has the main central part and the ending it has. I had done the same. Soupmail for you
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Congrats on your fine win, CayCay. Well done.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 12:07 AM
This poem is really spectacular! I agree with Andrea too it is one of your best! You must have been inspired as this poem flows as if guided by the hand of angels. I love it CayCay! Into my faves! : ) xxoo
Godwin Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:05 AM
I have felt this way in the combination of water, sky and a heavy heart - I drew from that. I am delighted with your comments, they warm me with their sweetness and sincerity. Be well, my friend. Love ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Forgot to Congratulate you! ! My computer is running like a turtle today.
Ashley Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Returning with big congratulations CayCay for your fantastic win with your gorgeous and expressive poem It's such a joy to read this impressive poem again.. Warmest wishes my friend. I hope all is well with you and yours. ~Susan
Godwin Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Thank you, Susan. Please forgive how behind I am on all things Soup - life has been a'happening lately. Driving brother to Baltimore today (he is now bi-polar medicated by local VA hosp and I'm taking him to a VA drug rehab.) Don't know when I'll have quality Soup time, but I know it will always have a season in my life. Take good care, dear one ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:18 PM
wow, I am SO thrilled for you that you placed high with this. I did not have a dang THING for this contest so I had to hurry and make something up, so I am glad just to be at the bottom of the list!! Miss you, Caycay!!
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:35 AM
I agree with Andrea, I think this IS your best writing that I have seen, I must fave this one, it is that beautiful. Congrats on a great win, and to think you were one point away from two historically monumental masterpieces should tell you something about your skill level, what an amazing improvement you've made!
Hamilton Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:41 PM
No, I was referring to the two first place poems, first time two poems got 38/40, historic, yours 37/40, that's what I meant!
Godwin Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Oh, you must be referring to this, plus your last contest - took me a bit to land on understanding concerning your comments about 'two historically ...' I appreciate your contests, and you, but you know that already. Thank you for you encouragement, I embrace it with a glad heart. All the best .... CayCay
Ashley Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 7:30 PM
A soothing write awashed in spiritual, emotional and physical rejuvenation, CayCay. I enjoyed your beautiful content and lovely intimate imagery. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes from me.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Dear Caycay, this is one of your best poems. I think you do so well with free verse,and knowing how Greg appreciates good imagery, I bet this makes the winner list. It's a winner with ME. One of the best I have read on this theme of water and sky. It's just filled with such soothing bliss!
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Beautifully sensuous poetry. Superbly done, CayCay.
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much, Line - I sincerely appreciate your comments. All the best ... CayCay
One Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Wonderful imagery in this poem, I have seen some excellent writes for this contest and yours is up there with the best... I found it a sensual write that created vivid imagery...
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Ew la la - I did sensual! I embrace your comments, they were a total 'upper' to read. Thank you so much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Michael Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Filled with the warm embrace of the night...You expressed your hearts desires enveloped in love...All the best CayCay...A sweet poem
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, Arturo - I sure appreciate your upbeat comments. All the best to you ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 5:33 AM
Oh, this is a very lovely and intimate poem you have shared for your entry for the contest CayCay. The ocean captivates with the soothing sound of waves. I love being close to the ocean. Beautiful! : )
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Maybe before we are too old for swimsuits we can 'do' a beach together and frolic! Thank you for such lovely comments. I'm loving you ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 3:07 AM
Our union with the universe is the freedom our soul seeks. Wondrous poem -an opening of inner self! Loved it dear, CayCay.
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Thank you, the poem is the fiction that my muse took me to and I enjoyed the write. I also enjoy seeing your face here! All is in divine order, and I know you know that. Hugs ... CayCay
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