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Stars Sparkling Satin Water

Standing with feet spread and arms opened wide, I give myself to the beauty of this ocean night. Though at a calm inlet’s entrance, my ears bear witness to near crashing waves focusing their roll. My solitude loves ocean sounds as favored music while I absorb comfort from stars so brightly lucid. Consolation is no illusion, night invites my intrusion, calms my confusion and lifts all my cares on high. In daylight, I hide, keep fears inside my weep until the world sleeps and I may dare sneak to the freedom of infinite sky and sea. Placing my float upon the water, I then lay face up, give way to the inlet to steer my coast and to stars sparkling endless dreams evoked. I dangle my fingers in the satin water ripple, sigh as night upon water eases all of ill fashion and natural darkness washes me with peace. I am grateful to night for its water cradle, for clear dark sky where angels sparkle stars until all twinkles sigh signal away my fears. Though I must depart the night’s embrace I lust before the daylight begins its revealing start, I stay prayerful for the night and water pattern that stroke me with hope while afloat their passion.
Strand Select Y January 4, 2018

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Date: 3/3/2018 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 2/28/2018 12:07:00 AM
This poem is really spectacular! I agree with Andrea too it is one of your best! You must have been inspired as this poem flows as if guided by the hand of angels. I love it CayCay! Into my faves! : ) xxoo
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/2/2018 8:05:00 AM
I have felt this way in the combination of water, sky and a heavy heart - I drew from that. I am delighted with your comments, they warm me with their sweetness and sincerity. Be well, my friend. Love ... CayCay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/28/2018 12:09:00 AM
Forgot to Congratulate you! ! My computer is running like a turtle today.
Date: 2/27/2018 7:11:00 PM
Returning with big congratulations CayCay for your fantastic win with your gorgeous and expressive poem It's such a joy to read this impressive poem again.. Warmest wishes my friend. I hope all is well with you and yours. ~Susan
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/2/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. Please forgive how behind I am on all things Soup - life has been a'happening lately. Driving brother to Baltimore today (he is now bi-polar medicated by local VA hosp and I'm taking him to a VA drug rehab.) Don't know when I'll have quality Soup time, but I know it will always have a season in my life. Take good care, dear one ... CayCay
Date: 2/27/2018 6:18:00 PM
wow, I am SO thrilled for you that you placed high with this. I did not have a dang THING for this contest so I had to hurry and make something up, so I am glad just to be at the bottom of the list!! Miss you, Caycay!!
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:35:00 AM
I agree with Andrea, I think this IS your best writing that I have seen, I must fave this one, it is that beautiful. Congrats on a great win, and to think you were one point away from two historically monumental masterpieces should tell you something about your skill level, what an amazing improvement you've made!
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/2/2018 7:41:00 PM
No, I was referring to the two first place poems, first time two poems got 38/40, historic, yours 37/40, that's what I meant!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/2/2018 8:12:00 AM
Oh, you must be referring to this, plus your last contest - took me a bit to land on understanding concerning your comments about 'two historically ...' I appreciate your contests, and you, but you know that already. Thank you for you encouragement, I embrace it with a glad heart. All the best .... CayCay
Date: 1/9/2018 7:30:00 PM
A soothing write awashed in spiritual, emotional and physical rejuvenation, CayCay. I enjoyed your beautiful content and lovely intimate imagery. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes from me.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:52:00 AM
Dear Caycay, this is one of your best poems. I think you do so well with free verse,and knowing how Greg appreciates good imagery, I bet this makes the winner list. It's a winner with ME. One of the best I have read on this theme of water and sky. It's just filled with such soothing bliss!
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:00:00 PM
Beautifully sensuous poetry. Superbly done, CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/5/2018 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line - I sincerely appreciate your comments. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 1/5/2018 7:53:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this poem, I have seen some excellent writes for this contest and yours is up there with the best... I found it a sensual write that created vivid imagery...
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/5/2018 10:33:00 AM
Ew la la - I did sensual! I embrace your comments, they were a total 'upper' to read. Thank you so much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 1/5/2018 7:07:00 AM
Filled with the warm embrace of the night...You expressed your hearts desires enveloped in love...All the best CayCay...A sweet poem
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/5/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo - I sure appreciate your upbeat comments. All the best to you ... CayCay
Date: 1/5/2018 5:33:00 AM
Oh, this is a very lovely and intimate poem you have shared for your entry for the contest CayCay. The ocean captivates with the soothing sound of waves. I love being close to the ocean. Beautiful! : )
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/5/2018 10:31:00 AM
Maybe before we are too old for swimsuits we can 'do' a beach together and frolic! Thank you for such lovely comments. I'm loving you ... CayCay
Date: 1/5/2018 3:07:00 AM
Our union with the universe is the freedom our soul seeks. Wondrous poem -an opening of inner self! Loved it dear, CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/5/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you, the poem is the fiction that my muse took me to and I enjoyed the write. I also enjoy seeing your face here! All is in divine order, and I know you know that. Hugs ... CayCay

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