Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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22.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Stars Of Clarity 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress 

1st place in the contest

- Stars Of Clarity -

                                     In the realms of heaven,
                                   while the moons gears turn
                                        As adventure gold,
                             stars of clarity with merry mysteries
                            Whisper gentle words of golden value,
                                           changeless bliss
                                      With shimmer of silver,
                                           soft is the touch
                                         Uninhibited by time,
                                   in the sweetness of moments
                                           The honest eyes,
                                     speechless with admiration

                                        Waiting for Cinderella,
                                that takes the milky way home
                                      Through golden banners,
                                           up toward the sky
                                  Crystal spear flickering spire,
                                             a shooting star
                                           Unreal as dreams,
                                           beauty has kissed
                                   They still greet us generously,
                                          with antique virtues
                               Through the celestial looms of time
                              flawless pearls in the threads of light
                                            This priceless gift,
                                      which all mankind may share

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Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2023 at 4:41 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Stars of Clarity" write/picture. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with your win...............

Silent One December 4, 2023 at 2:27 PM I knew this would be a top winner..lovely poem. Congratulations

Sotto Poet December 4, 2023 at 9:04 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Anne-Lise.

Ink Empress December 4, 2023 at 12:12 AM Oh wow what a gorgeous picture to go with your ethereal and beautiful poem, i really loved the flow of this and the imagery you’ve painted so seamlessly in such a creative manner. I must also point out that the cinderella line won me over, and i was in awe? Captivated by the way you’ve written this, fits the theme of the prompt so eloquently,i also love the milky way line and ending, very unique. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved

Sara Kendrick November 28, 2023 at 5:13 AM Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us about "Stars Of Clarity". I enjoyed reading your version. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K

Paige Hind November 24, 2023 at 6:30 PM Beautiful! I enjoyed reading!

Charles Messina November 24, 2023 at 3:09 PM This is wonderful, Anne-Lise. BOL in the contest! hugs :)

Maria Williams November 24, 2023 at 5:53 AM Beautiful poetry Anne filled with shimmering imagery. I love the image you've used as well. Good luck in the contest . .Hugs

Beryl Edmonds November 23, 2023 at 3:53 PM Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, beautiful words, they’re ‘flawless pearls in the threads of light.’ All the best, Belle

Mystic Rose Rose November 23, 2023 at 3:11 PM Your poem is both flawless and a gift from the heart, thank you for sharing yourself and through every precious word penned Anne. xo

Vijay Pandit November 23, 2023 at 5:44 AM Much enjoyed a ride through your hues of cosmos above. Well done, Anne-Lise.

Yann Rolland November 22, 2023 at 4:39 PM such beauty in images and feelings, i adore this luminous poeù, thanks Poet

Abdullah Alhemaidy November 22, 2023 at 4:24 PM Very beautiful poem!

Joseph P. DiMino November 22, 2023 at 1:38 PM "Waiting for Cinderella, that takes the milky way home Through golden banners," -- "Through the celestial looms of time flawless pearls in the threads of light" -- flawless poetry. Superb!

Sotto Poet November 22, 2023 at 1:28 PM Such a wonderful poem with stunning metaphors coupled with top notch diction is just exquisite. Your magical thoughts shed even more beauty to this writing. Happy thanksgiving to you and yours

Silent One November 22, 2023 at 10:45 AM This priceless gift which all mankind may share.. so very true and a lovely poem full of magical imagery... this one should do well in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2023 at 10:56 AM - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs