Stars of Clarity

The bright blue sky and white fluffy clouds,
are slipping far away.
The day is coming to a close,
and it is now their bedtime.
Very soon the huge sky will change,
the sky is getting dressed for night time.
The velvet background will be magical,
with a full shining moon.
Then the "stars of clarity" will appear,
like bright diamonds looking down on us.
The full shining moon,
and the "stars of clarity" will light the wisemen's way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 4, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Lovely imagery in yout poem Paula..congratulations on your placement
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December 5, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Stars of Clarity" write to have lovely imagery. Have a fun day writing away....................
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December 4, 2023 at 9:16 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, Paula.
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December 5, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write. Have a fun day writing away....................
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December 4, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. Blessings, Belle
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December 5, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back again. Have a fun day writing away.............
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December 4, 2023 at 6:05 AM
"2 Place" Stars of Clarity ~  Date Written:11/22/2023
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December 4, 2023 at 2:54 AM
This is really sweet and flows so well too, emanates hope in such a celestial manner. I love how you’ve written “ the sky is getting dressed for night time. The velvet background will be magical“ so magical and dreamy how youv painted imagery. “ Then the "stars of clarity" will appear,like bright diamonds looking down on us.” Gorgeous. Absolutely love the descriptive lines in this. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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December 4, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Thank You for your note, very kind words and for your congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life for your wonderful contest. Thank You for having it/for the placement. You have put a smile on my heart. Have a fun day writing away................
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November 28, 2023 at 11:25 AM
What a lovely picture, Paula! I especially love the last line as "stars of clarity" appeared for the "wisemen!" to enlighten them. Best wishes for the contest. Advent blessings to you!
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November 29, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Thank You for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write/love my last line. I thought it was the way to end it. Have a fun day writing away.................
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 4:46 PM
A lovely light hearted piece.
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November 27, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a fun day writing away.........
Proxenos Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.
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November 27, 2023 at 6:42 PM
Thank You for your note. Thank You for your congratulation on being in Poetry Soups third Anthology book. I was very honored that Soup added me to their new book. Have a fun day writing away.........
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November 24, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Ahh, Paula, "...slipping far away." Sounds like me, I'm the 4th wiseman, hmm? Enjoying your usual fine writes, my friend. Enjoy and save, if e'er possibles, on the Black Friday deals. Aloha, William
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November 27, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Thank You for your note. Glad you are enjoying my usual writes. That make me happy. I enjoyed writing my "Stars of Clarity." Glad to know you are 4th wiseman. What gift did you bring??? No Black Friday shopping for me. I have it all done. Well maybe I could use 2 gift cards. No big deal...  Have a fun day writing away....................
May Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 1:06 PM
I like your ending line Paula, Very nicely penned
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November 24, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write/like my ending line. Have a fun day writing away.........
Romios Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Happy Thanksgiving)); Poetess! Pangie
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November 24, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Hope you had a wonderful/blessed Thanksgiving Day... Have a fun day writing away................
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November 22, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Wonderful, Paula.
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November 23, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you found my write to be Wonderful. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun day writing away................
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November 22, 2023 at 6:24 PM
That’s so lovely Paula, I really like the last two lines also… Blessings, Belle
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November 23, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write/the last two lines. Have a fun day writing away...................
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November 22, 2023 at 5:21 PM
A magical and lovely poem, Paula. I love the final two lines. This is a fave. Blessings.
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November 23, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you found it to be magical/lovely poem/love the final two lines. I see FAV??? Thank You. You made my day very happy. Have a fun day writing away................
DiMino Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Very beautiful, and uplifting reminder. And we must follow in their path to salvation. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving my friend!
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November 23, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write/found it to be very beautiful/uplifting reminder. Have a wonderful/blessed Thanksgiving Day writing away................
Poet Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:31 PM
So exquisitely crafted poem, Paula, your poem flows effortlessly with nice touches and thoughts. Good luck with the contest
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November 23, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank You for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write /found it to be exquisitely crafted/flows effortlessly/nice touches/thoughts. You make my heart smile. Thank You... Have a fun day writing away................
Ball Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Lovely Paula. Really like the scene you create here. Nicely done. This should be on a Christmas card with a picture of the three wisemen. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you really like the scene I have created with this write. Guess it would make a good Christmas card with the three wisemen. Have a fun day writing away...................
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November 22, 2023 at 10:24 AM
How lovely.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write. Have a fun day writing away...................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 9:45 AM
I think you must be a very sweet person as you delight us with your simply lovely words, dear Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thank You for your note and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a fun day writing away................
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November 22, 2023 at 7:30 AM
- Lovely written, Paula - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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November 22, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Thank You for your note and for your GL. Glad you enjoyed my "Stars of Clarity" write. Hugs................
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November 22, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Stars of Clarity ~  Date Written:11/22/2023
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