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STARS OF CLARITY -3rd

Gorgeously gleaming gems of hope 
For fate that hangs in uphill slope 
They shine so bright to give new light 
To a path that fades out of sight 

They gleam and glow like pristine snow 
Like crystal clear fountain, they flow 
Their glimmer makes a bright new day 
Their fair flares make a holiday 

And even when the moon is dark 
Their flickers give a hopeful spark 
The faint hearts shine in deep delight 
Over their wonders, fair and bright

Stars of clarity poetry contest 
3rd place

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Date: 12/4/2023 2:47:00 PM
congratulations on your placement
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Date: 12/4/2023 3:51:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 12/4/2023 6:19:00 AM
I love the way you’ve interpreted the prompt in such eloquence and presented a very poetically pleasing take, especially the ending stood out for me, thank you for sharing, congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/4/2023 7:32:00 AM
Thank you very much...
Date: 11/26/2023 1:06:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem, it's lovely. Well written.
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Date: 11/26/2023 1:10:00 AM
Thank you very much once again...

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