John Hamilton Poet Rhyme

Stars Like Diamonds

Stars like diamonds


The stars are like diamonds, 
shining brightly in your eyes
Illuminating my darkness 
as you cover me with your skies

The moon in it's splendor 
is nothing when compared to you
Your reflection of my love  
comes beaming right on through


Excerpt taken from my poem 
called Universal love.


John Derek Hamilton
January 14,2020

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Mystic Rose Rose October 20, 2020 at 4:13 AM My how I long for some of that Universal love you speak of dear poet. Nice words, your muse is not asleep, she just wants to bring back the good lines you wrote, so they can be re read and enjoyed. Thank you for sharing have a blessed day day John. John Hamilton October 20, 2020 at 7:48 AM Thanks Vie, yes that is the hope universal love, a brotherhood of mankind, soon to come!

Brenda Chiri January 27, 2020 at 7:09 PM detiene la bellezza come le stelle! A gorgeous write my friend!;) John Hamilton January 29, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thanks Brenda, glad you liked it. Ciao

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2020 at 8:44 PM you could even make this work for Gregory's contest! John Hamilton January 16, 2020 at 9:24 PM I already entered another one!

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2020 at 8:43 PM well, repost away!!! I really love this one!!! Keep them coming! John Hamilton January 16, 2020 at 9:24 PM Thanks Andrea

Brandy Nicole January 16, 2020 at 7:02 PM "as you cover me with your skies" Oh my!! Such a beautiful thought. Very romantic. As I caress your words around me, I am there in the moment. Such a wonderful feeling indeed. :) Brandy John Hamilton January 16, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thanks Brandy I knew you would like this one, thanks for your nice words of support!

Kelly Deschler January 15, 2020 at 1:33 PM This was a truly lovely poem to read John... Keep up the wonderful writing! John Hamilton January 15, 2020 at 3:07 PM Thanks Kelly I'm glad you passed by my way today and left your kind comment, I do appreciate your visit!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 15, 2020 at 8:50 AM I hadn't read this so I'm glad you reposted it. It's a great awesome poem that pleases my lunar lover heart even though you see stellar charms in your lady love which is so romantic. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. John Hamilton January 15, 2020 at 12:02 PM Thanks SZK, I'm glad you liked it enough to leave a nice comment, will look up your poem!

Winged Warrior January 14, 2020 at 5:49 PM I remember this one...strong as ever good bud...happy vacation Johnny Boy...all the best from the Wingster :o) John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 9:06 PM Wow you got a great memory, thanks for the fly by WW and for the thumbs up on this one!

Sandra Adams January 14, 2020 at 5:22 PM wow... this is beautiful John...i don't think i have ever read poems from you, mostly lyrics... now i wonder why... you write wonderfully...hugs John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 9:05 PM Thanks Sandy, as I mentioned to others songs come easily but poetry doesn't, it seems like too much work but I know I just have to put my mind to it, my problem is I think I've said it all, at least I'm feeling uninspired, but hopefully...

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 1:40 PM Your poem evokes recollections of staring into a loved one's eyes neath a starlit sky. Beautifully penned, John. You have a romantic soul, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 2:31 PM That's probably true Carolyn, I need to let her inspire me again, I've kind of gotten away from poetry as songs come more easily, but I'll give it a try. Glad you came by with your nice comment!

Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 12:16 PM I think it is beautiful and something I wish I had written. Nice one my friend. John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 2:29 PM Wow thanks Chris, I guess I should try poetry more often, it's just songs come to me more easily, but I'll give it a try, glad you liked this one so much!

Lin Lane January 14, 2020 at 12:05 PM Yes sir, I do like it ~ a lot. Now take the plunge and write something new. You don't need to wait for that gypsy muse. Show her she's not needed. John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 2:27 PM That's funny Lin, I hope I can come up with something, been a long time since writing poetry, I'll give it a go, thanks for the encouragement!

Caren Krutsinger January 14, 2020 at 11:53 AM She is no doubt smiling at this lovely tribute. John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 2:26 PM Yes indeed she is, thanks Caren!

Vijay Pandit January 14, 2020 at 11:34 AM Enjoyed the verses of love John--you make her so beautiful in your precious words. John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 2:25 PM Wow thanks Vijay I guess poetry is more popular than lyrics, Lin was right it seems, glad you enjoyed it!