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Stars In the Dark

Pain Expunge Green darner Waltzing in mist at midnight cobalt. You're crazy by night sky. the stars upon which you stare. despite those shortsighted white specks, Spruce-colored asteroids might have formed. same as the whacked chords of a bird's wrecked wings, harmony of the growth, qualm the heartbeat. Sonic whispers and moonstruck cosmos Which once enthused a warm dreamland pectoral phantasmal crave drawing on sapphire rocks, heart hellish drumbeats. Red silken shows. Seas mourning waft grief air
Written: December 12, 2022
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Buehler Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 12:10 PM
This is a beautiful etheree, with fantastic imagery. Happy holidays!
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Green darker……Midnight cobalt ….spruced Coloured…. Pectoral phantasmal crave… Amazing words chosen. Congrats
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 6:42 AM
I love this form Lasaad and a double one is a bonus Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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December 17, 2022 at 2:55 AM
A lovely Etheree poem Sotto, beautiful words, two I’ve never heard before, pectoral and phantasmal… Belle
Poet Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 7:31 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words dear, Belle. Pectoral: is heartfelt or sincere. Phantasmal: is of or relating to objective reality as distorted by perception. Have a happy holidays.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Great use of the form to form a cosmic pattern plus a good description of what might be out there in outer space. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 12:43 PM
this has some great imagery in it, my friend. Keep up the good work.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 1:36 AM
Amazing format. The night sky is always wonderful.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 3:57 AM
Cosmic wonder of Sky's symphony contacted by your miraculous pen, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!
George Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 10:20 PM
Stunning description of the night sky... ! Amazing use of vocabulary and beautiful images !
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Sonic whispers, moonstruck cosmos, sapphire rocks... --your poem dwells in wonderful celestial imagery, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 10:47 AM
- Excellently written and beautifully designed, Las :) - If it's for a contest ... I wish you the best of luck :) - hugs
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