Stars In the Dark

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Pain Expunge Green darner Waltzing in mist at midnight cobalt. You're crazy by night sky. the stars upon which you stare. despite those shortsighted white specks, Spruce-colored asteroids might have formed. same as the whacked chords of a bird's wrecked wings, harmony of the growth, qualm the heartbeat. Sonic whispers and moonstruck cosmos Which once enthused a warm dreamland pectoral phantasmal crave drawing on sapphire rocks, heart hellish drumbeats. Red silken shows. Seas mourning waft grief air Written: December 12, 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/18/2022 12:10:00 PM

This is a beautiful etheree, with fantastic imagery. Happy holidays!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/18/2022 8:38:00 AM

Green darker……Midnight cobalt ….spruced Coloured…. Pectoral phantasmal crave… Amazing words chosen. Congrats

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2022 6:42:00 AM

I love this form Lasaad and a double one is a bonus Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/17/2022 2:55:00 AM

A lovely Etheree poem Sotto, beautiful words, two I’ve never heard before, pectoral and phantasmal… Belle

Sotto Poet
Date: 12/17/2022 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words dear, Belle. Pectoral: is heartfelt or sincere. Phantasmal: is of or relating to objective reality as distorted by perception. Have a happy holidays.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2022 1:04:00 PM

Great use of the form to form a cosmic pattern plus a good description of what might be out there in outer space. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara