Stars I Have Loved

STARS   I   HAVE   LOVED


No constellations  above city haze, 
No familiar groupings…all obscured.
Below,  there are  new  groupings
New constellations - city  offerings.
Police car comets, mosque moons : 
Replacements  for real  life.

Orion,  Gemini ,  Auriga  gone.
Your stars twinkled.      These don’t.
Supermarket,  metro,  gas stations, 
Stare unrelentingly all night long.
The  aurora  is gone -  the city took it.


City   takes ;  city gives back.
The city is god   -   at night.
As  real stars fade with the dawn’s delight, 
Fade too  do  these new stars,
As  sun comes  up with his  daily daylight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Babcock Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 12:08 PM
In large cities they no longer see the stars due to pollution in the cities. I love to star gaze and we had a telescope that went with our son when he left home. How awesome to see Jupiter's 4 moons and the craters on the moon and Orions belt and all the wonders out there. Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl
Falotico Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Cool write on stars and life...Michael
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Very awesome write on stars I have loved, Sydney
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