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“Stars Falling” The time between the space of heaven and here is thinning, so the last thing I do is I write poems to you; love is like stars falling, you dive for cover, or stand and deliver there in that immovable place, with arms wide open, waiting to be sucked up into some unkind kind rapture; the heavens call - you begin to think, dangerously - romance must fall over all before it's too late, all hope and trust gone, it's a risky business, it's more than a rush this curtain call; if eyes could see like hearts want to, the soul inside this mind would - dance this last dance with you - and to hell with time and with this world. I’d lie down next to you I’d hold onto you make love not war, look up with you - see clearly all the stars falling and to hell with this world a last kiss we are co-joined, after all; at the end of this world no more separation no more war no more poems haunting the haunted haunting the torn ‘cause they’re watching all the stars falling, they are becoming - new worlds being born Candide Diderot. ‘25 "Love, let’s talk about love Is it anything and everything you hoped for? Or do the feeling haunt you? (Haunt) I know the feeling haunt you. (Haunt)" “The cosmos is within us. We are made of star-stuff. We are a way for the universe to know itself.” "Your heart is the Light of this world, don't cover it with your mind."

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Date: 3/22/2025 9:16:00 PM
“All the Stars”/Kendrick Lamar https://youtu.be/ju4KQT0wL0I?si=BLtRPFtwEZpb72iY
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Date: 3/22/2025 9:17:00 PM
LYRICS/"All the Stars", Kenrick Lamar. https://genius.com/Kendrick-lamar-and-sza-all-the-stars-album-version-lyrics

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