Stars Collide

She rushes through me, stars collide.
Bright dust trails, as we freely glide.
To stay or go, can't decide.
Divided we will fall.
Flying happy, we burned out, died.
Your great beauty I saw.


***For Dr. Mehta's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 10:52 PM
wow, sad and yet beautiful too. I like how you did that new verse of Dr. Ram's. So glad to see you tonight. HOpe you return tomorrow!
Roberts Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 10:19 PM
thats pretty
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