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Stars Collide

She rushes through me, stars collide. Bright dust trails, as we freely glide. To stay or go, can't decide. Divided we will fall. Flying happy, we burned out, died. Your great beauty I saw. ***For Dr. Mehta's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/6/2011 10:52:00 PM
wow, sad and yet beautiful too. I like how you did that new verse of Dr. Ram's. So glad to see you tonight. HOpe you return tomorrow!
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Date: 7/6/2011 10:19:00 PM
thats pretty
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