Stars Bow to Her Flame

Written: September 24, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand *********** She walks in shadow, born of flame, Her breath the wind, her steps untame. Night bows to her with silver grace, Stars blink in awe at her face. She is the storm that gods acclaim.
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George Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 1:41 AM
Your title itself is a poem. Well done dear friend. Congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Quite lovely, Lasaad! Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Fantastic imagery. Congratulations
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Great imagery in this Las. Congratulations! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 5:25 PM
such captivating words, dear Sotto. I especially liked 'night bows to her with silver grace.' That line is simply beautiful...best wishes with this contest entry as well, hugs from Texas Sara
Hind Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:31 PM
Power, "Stars blink in awe at her face." love that
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