Stars and Moon Await

Floating embers swivel golden flames go up 
towards marked enclaves a midnight sky 
skywards and onwards the stars and moon await
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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April 12, 2022 at 1:22 PM
I love the moon and stars... This is a wonderful write. Ann
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April 11, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Enjoyed your poem Vie. I love to star gaze and watch our northern lights. love phyl
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April 11, 2022 at 1:45 AM
An enchanting camp fire, i imagine here, Vie, whatever the poetry is lovely.
Ball Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Lovely Makes me think of fireworks rising to the stars. God Bless, JB
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April 10, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, The dark skyis beautiful with the shining stars and the full moon. Hugs.
Leffanta Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 11:48 AM
As smoke rises, it carries the prayers of native people . . . .Enjoyed!
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 4:48 AM
A beautiful poem, Vienna.
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 3:22 AM
Wonderful imagery here, Vie:)
Deo Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Pithy and powerful. Your pen helps us discover much - and a writers skill, soul, and purity, an artists stout and mature heart
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