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Stars

Falling. Falling. Falling. Regret fills the mind. A quarter of the way down, I think about my family. Halfway down, I remember that I never called my sister. Nearly there now; I realize that every single problem can be solved. A porcelain figure shatters on the pavement. A heel grinds it into dust. Attention. I drift. There are stars. I see stars. Stars.

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Date: 5/10/2024 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/23/2017 1:30:00 AM
Beautifully written. I see the spiralling down, sadness in there. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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