David Scott Poet Rhyme

Stars

Stars and the moon
Stars studied in astronomy
Stars telling your fortune
Stars in astrology
Stars a huge mass
Stars orange, blue, white
Stars little pockets of gas
Stars five points of light
Stars orbit the atmosphere
Stars their is all so many 
Stars a serlestrial spear
Stars a distant galaxy
Stars and their formation
Stars where they from
Stars a constalasion
Stars look a shooting one




Updated tied up bit idea 2012 written 2012




This spare of moment idea I wrote a year ago still been wondering wheather to put on here
wanted ito addd to it but s=not sure where to go with it 
when I was writing elements of life and mother earth
i dont know much about astrology,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wanted to add more to this 


LOOKING FOR LAST VERSE  TO FINISH     HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

still couple verses lines not happy with just litle insight on subject

MAYBE SOMEONE COULD HELP 
INSPIERD B SOUP POETS AT TIME JAN FEB 2012............................

WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDCOTT   ,,,,,,   2012>>>>>

written jan 2012

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David William Breidenthal April 25, 2014 at 5:01 PM As my sister says, it is mesmerizing. You captured the imagination here...the stars were greatly described and I loved every single line. Thanks for posting this and nice 1st poem to begin with. -DWB

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2013 at 10:33 AM Hi David... sending soup mail... enjoyed this one again... I love shooting stars.. Linda David Scott September 3, 2013 at 10:39 AM Thanks mate trying to capture that feeling here my meaning of stars xxx

Laura Breidenthal July 26, 2013 at 3:53 PM This is dreamy and even has a tint of longing. Stars are so mesmerizing. Love how you implemented it into words. Always, Laura David Scott September 3, 2013 at 10:41 AM thgank you for coment mate did not know where to go with this at first trying to capture a moment dxx

Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2013 at 1:58 PM Hello David, i like the up date on your poem... Stars, in your eyes,,,,,,,,,,,, or...... Stars, that light up the sky..... Stars, in the night........... LOL, giving it a shot.... thank you for the comment... xox~ Linda

Charmaine Chircop June 14, 2013 at 5:38 PM Make a wish and it comes true.That s what shooting stars mean to me-beautiful post Scott

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2013 at 7:24 PM oh wow David, this poem is very lovely, i love the stars, and i love your poem.... they hang very well in every line here.. Always ~ LINDA

Eileen Manassian June 13, 2013 at 12:01 PM I don't think you need to add anything to it, my dear! It is beautiful the way it is! I love stars....My dad is good at astronomy. Don't believe in astrology myself, but I do love looking at the constellations at night! Love write!