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stationed at the height Celestial wayfarers of the night Dancing damsels with the light Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight Placed First Strand's (1064) Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/3/2022 11:09:00 AM

A lovely piece Valsa with your trademark poetic lines like "celestial wayfarers." Congratulations on your win!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/13/2021 8:36:00 AM

Each line is stunning! Beautiful!

Valsa George
Date: 12/13/2021 9:12:00 PM

Thank you so much.... P.S. I feel encouraged !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/12/2021 4:31:00 PM

In four lines, you have traveled the celestial skies. Wonderful, Valsa. :) Gershon

Valsa George
Date: 12/12/2021 8:31:00 PM

It is the privilege of being a poet... ! :) :) Thanks a lot good friend !

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/10/2021 9:09:00 PM

So lovely, with beautiful rhymes and imagery dear Vslsa... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani

Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2021 3:38:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Ani.... Thank you much !

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/10/2021 11:17:00 AM

A lovely piece of brevity Valsa, with superb rhyme and imagery. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon

Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2021 3:37:00 AM

Thanks a lot... ! Seeing you after a long time Gordon !

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/10/2021 10:12:00 AM

And all the while flirting with you . . . .

Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2021 3:36:00 AM

Yes, they flirt with all inhabitants down. and with you too Rico...Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2021 5:16:00 AM

Your descriptions adorn your theme my friend. So well done, Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2021 3:34:00 AM

Much grateful, dear friend !

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 12/10/2021 1:42:00 AM

No Titan can withstand anyone. Lovely stanza.

Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2021 3:33:00 AM

Thanks a lot Victor !