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Stars

stationed at the height
Celestial wayfarers of the night
Dancing damsels with the light
Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight


Placed First
Strand's (1064) Poetry Contest

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2021

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February 3, 2022 at 11:09 AM

A lovely piece Valsa with your trademark poetic lines like "celestial wayfarers." Congratulations on your win!

December 13, 2021 at 8:36 AM

Each line is stunning! Beautiful!

December 13, 2021 at 9:12 PM

Thank you so much.... P.S. I feel encouraged !

December 12, 2021 at 4:31 PM

In four lines, you have traveled the celestial skies. Wonderful, Valsa. :) Gershon

December 12, 2021 at 8:31 PM

It is the privilege of being a poet... ! :) :) Thanks a lot good friend !

Anitha Jayasankar

December 10, 2021 at 9:09 PM

So lovely, with beautiful rhymes and imagery dear Vslsa... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani

December 11, 2021 at 3:38 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Ani.... Thank you much !

Gordon Mcconnell

December 10, 2021 at 11:17 AM

A lovely piece of brevity Valsa, with superb rhyme and imagery. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon

December 11, 2021 at 3:37 AM

Thanks a lot... ! Seeing you after a long time Gordon !

December 10, 2021 at 10:12 AM

And all the while flirting with you . . . .

December 11, 2021 at 3:36 AM

Yes, they flirt with all inhabitants down. and with you too Rico...Thank you!

December 10, 2021 at 5:16 AM

Your descriptions adorn your theme my friend. So well done, Valsa.

December 11, 2021 at 3:34 AM

Much grateful, dear friend !

Victor Buhagiar

December 10, 2021 at 1:42 AM

No Titan can withstand anyone. Lovely stanza.

December 11, 2021 at 3:33 AM

Thanks a lot Victor !

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