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Stars

stationed at the height
Celestial wayfarers of the night
Dancing damsels with the light
Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight


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Strand's (1064) Poetry Contest

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2021

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Sam Kauffman Date: 2/3/2022 11:09:00 AM A lovely piece Valsa with your trademark poetic lines like "celestial wayfarers." Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

P.S. Awtry Date: 12/13/2021 8:36:00 AM Each line is stunning! Beautiful! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/13/2021 9:12:00 PM Thank you so much.... P.S. I feel encouraged !

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/12/2021 4:31:00 PM In four lines, you have traveled the celestial skies. Wonderful, Valsa. :) Gershon Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/12/2021 8:31:00 PM It is the privilege of being a poet... ! :) :) Thanks a lot good friend !

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 12/10/2021 9:09:00 PM So lovely, with beautiful rhymes and imagery dear Vslsa... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/11/2021 3:38:00 AM Glad you enjoyed it Ani.... Thank you much !

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 12/10/2021 11:17:00 AM A lovely piece of brevity Valsa, with superb rhyme and imagery. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/11/2021 3:37:00 AM Thanks a lot... ! Seeing you after a long time Gordon !

Rico Leffanta Date: 12/10/2021 10:12:00 AM And all the while flirting with you . . . . Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/11/2021 3:36:00 AM Yes, they flirt with all inhabitants down. and with you too Rico...Thank you!

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/10/2021 5:16:00 AM Your descriptions adorn your theme my friend. So well done, Valsa. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/11/2021 3:34:00 AM Much grateful, dear friend !

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/10/2021 1:42:00 AM No Titan can withstand anyone. Lovely stanza. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/11/2021 3:33:00 AM Thanks a lot Victor !