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two stars coruscate inside a hole in the ground rat's eyes from tunnel Dec-26-2020

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Date: 1/2/2021 3:07:00 PM
interesting haiku, good luck in the contest;-) happy new year:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2020 8:42:00 AM
Fantastic haiku...
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Date: 12/27/2020 5:33:00 AM
Wow, this is a great Haiku Supraja ! Well done :)
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Date: 12/26/2020 9:03:00 AM
Great imagery you captured if rats' eyes Supraja in these three lines. Hugs ~ Ani
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
***of rats' eyes
Date: 12/26/2020 4:57:00 AM
Very clever Supraja!
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Date: 12/26/2020 12:47:00 AM
That's very original. ~~
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