Starry Night Or Sorry Chennaite

The times twist and rise like rare tornadoes 
Timelines elsewhere just turn into homilies
And the stars-turned-hearts are  bleeding blues
The happenstance-moon for once is not made
of light to light up our home CFL’s
The rain gods do not drop water bottles
to the marooned; or the air, mantras, to reverse
Rigor mortis. The sky, hawker of visuals,
implores blind pathways to unchoke themselves.
I bide time in my twelfth floor Himalayas.
Kedar’s water demons come calling,
metamorphosed into meteorology,
dunking Chennai’s life in tears where float bloated
the arid wits of the metro’s whirlpool gods.

Note: Based on a Van Gogh painting 'Starry night', which struck a chord in me during the  Chennai floods of 2015.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Teagan Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 2:07 PM
wow. I'm in awe. This is gorgeous. why have you not posted lately? I hope you're ok.
Nair Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 10:08 PM
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Palmer Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:56 PM
it struck a great cord in you,,great write Sir Nair,i'm back friend
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 5:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your writes on the site Perfect Assertion Raising the Bar The Gift of Presence, congratulations...
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May 21, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Wonderful, very nice description ~*
Puddifoot Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 5:34 AM
see, this is what i'm on about jaggy, this is an excellent modern sonnet, and yet it received no comments! this is the kind of poem i would place on my winning list, because it has depth, it's unusual and has great wording...i know that van gogh painting, and he is one of my favourite artists
Nair Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 11:56 AM
If you have the time, please check out www.ekphrastic.net, which has selected three of my poems based on paintings for publication, as part of their 20 poem challenge in which i too was a participant.
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