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Starry Night Or Sorry Chennaite

The times twist and rise like rare tornadoes Timelines elsewhere just turn into homilies And the stars-turned-hearts are bleeding blues The happenstance-moon for once is not made of light to light up our home CFL’s The rain gods do not drop water bottles to the marooned; or the air, mantras, to reverse Rigor mortis. The sky, hawker of visuals, implores blind pathways to unchoke themselves. I bide time in my twelfth floor Himalayas. Kedar’s water demons come calling, metamorphosed into meteorology, dunking Chennai’s life in tears where float bloated the arid wits of the metro’s whirlpool gods. Note: Based on a Van Gogh painting 'Starry night', which struck a chord in me during the Chennai floods of 2015.

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Date: 1/3/2018 2:07:00 PM
wow. I'm in awe. This is gorgeous. why have you not posted lately? I hope you're ok.
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 1/3/2018 10:08:00 PM
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:56:00 PM
it struck a great cord in you,,great write Sir Nair,i'm back friend
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Date: 5/24/2017 5:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your writes on the site Perfect Assertion Raising the Bar The Gift of Presence, congratulations...
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Date: 5/21/2017 10:16:00 PM
Wonderful, very nice description ~*
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:34:00 AM
see, this is what i'm on about jaggy, this is an excellent modern sonnet, and yet it received no comments! this is the kind of poem i would place on my winning list, because it has depth, it's unusual and has great wording...i know that van gogh painting, and he is one of my favourite artists
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 3/18/2017 11:56:00 AM
If you have the time, please check out www.ekphrastic.net, which has selected three of my poems based on paintings for publication, as part of their 20 poem challenge in which i too was a participant.

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